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Survival of the Sprats
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Survival of The Sprats

 

Waves rolling on a lonely sea

And the waking sun glowing red

Half obscured by cotton wool clouds

And the seagulls flying fancy free

 

The fishermen haul in their nets

A thousand fish, or maybe more

Take their dying breath and let

Fate take its toll

 

Sailing slowly on the ebbing tide

The trawlers head for the harbour

Their course is not at all wide

As they dock by the quay

 

Leaving the dawn catch

The fishermen head for the “Fishermen’s rest”

With pints and pies in hand

They down all that’s best

 

The cod and mackeral sigh in dismay

But the sprats have got away

They turn around with winking eyes

To say their last goodbyes

 

© Andrea Coltman

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Survival of the Sprats"
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 18, 2004
This is one of those spellbinding writes and
you can't put your finger on why;-)! I love
the lore of the sea, and you captured it here.
Fantastic write Andrea!

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on May 17, 2004
Totally captervated me, magical use of word pictures, one could feel the presence.

Nice one beaut..

Reviewed on May 16, 2004
There's something captivating about this poem - the imagery? the sea? The fishermen? the dawn? the sprats? Wow! You certainly have packed a lot of imageries in this one...and the result is just breathtaking.

~ Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu ~

Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)
Reviewed on May 14, 2004
great poem.

Reviewed on May 12, 2004
A beautiful picture and a beautiful read - wonderful write!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on May 12, 2004
Outstanding fishermans story poem Andrea!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on May 12, 2004
A pleasure to read, wonderful imagery.

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on May 12, 2004
So expressive and just a great
job!

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on May 12, 2004
I used to love to go fishing, and have no time for it anymore.
Thanks for taking me along on this seaside trip, this morning!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on May 12, 2004
Extremely interesting write, Andrea, and a very intriguing topic - felt like I was there.

Reviewed by Magnus Rater (Reader)
Reviewed on May 12, 2004
Wow! I can see the despair and resignation in the eyes of those in the net! The "phew" in the expressions of the lucky sprats and the utter indifference to the plight of those "caught" by the fisherman. Truly, the powerful engulf those of less power - c'est le vie!!!

Well done, Anthea! A future poet Laureate in the making!!!

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
Reviewed on May 12, 2004
Very vivid images. I used to go sea fishing -- long time ago. This brought some memories back. Thank you.

Carmen :-)

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
Reviewed on May 12, 2004
GREAT writing, Andrea!


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