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Sometimes
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Sometimes


 

Walking the empty streets, kicking the dirt

Sitting at home, mending torn shirts

Laughing out loud in company

Crying inside with hurt

 

Sometimes I know you

Sometimes I don’t

Sometimes you will

Sometimes you won’t

 

Skimming stones across a calm pool

Causing ripples, feeling a fool

Watching the clock on the wall

Waiting home on a wooden stool

 

Often I know you

Often I don’t

Often you will

Often you won’t

 

Beating hearts increase with motion

Showing undying love and devotion

Trying to work life out of love

Jilting logic for raw emotion

 

Moments I know you

Moments I don’t

Moments you will

Moments you won’t

 

Always I love you

Never I don’t

Always I will

Never I won’t

 

© Andrea Coltman

 


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 Reviews of "Sometimes"
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 18, 2004
You took a bunch of random words, shuffled them around like you were playing dominos, put them together and worked magic. This is good.

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on September 18, 2004
so young yet so wise..you fathom aspects of love that many seniors don't..by Jove I like your work...incredubly well written Andrea!


vesna:)

Reviewed by Handsum Hart
Reviewed on September 18, 2004
This strikes me as uncertainty in love. It's a painful situation to be in. I've been there and hated it.

This is a strong write.
Best wishes

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on September 18, 2004
This is beautiful so expressive Andrea!!!!

Reviewed on September 15, 2004
Andrea,

Another stunning and wonderful write - exceptional piece!

Robert

Reviewed by Andrea Da Costa (Reader)
Reviewed on September 14, 2004
So well expressed Andrea.....I felt the uncertainty of love strongly in this. Loved the last verse...great ending.

Andrea

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 13, 2004
Andrea this is top-drawer! What a wonderful
show of emotion and passion wanting to be tapped!
A superbly composed poem!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 13, 2004
Most excellently crafted Andrea!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on September 13, 2004
Love the style you wrote this, yet it feels so melanchonic, in an intelligent way.. Enjoyed reading this..

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on September 13, 2004
Great write!

Reviewed on September 13, 2004
Excellent Andrea, I loved how you wrote this,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on September 13, 2004
A snappingly moving, tenderly emotional piece of poetry Andrea!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on September 13, 2004
Sometimes, love truly hurts, and you've penned the emotion it can induce extremely well, Andrea.

Reviewed on September 13, 2004
Are you in love? If so, this explains it. Wonderful expression.

Sandie May Angel

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on September 13, 2004
This is very good. I enjoyed the powerful expression of emotion.


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