AuthorsDen.com   Join | Login    
Where Authors and Readers come together!

SIGNED BOOKS    AUTHORS    BOOKS    SAMPLE CHAPTERS    AUDIOBOOKS    eBOOKS    STORIES    ARTICLES    POETRY    BLOGS    NEWS    VIDEOS    SUCCESS    TESTIMONIALS

Featured Authors:  Pamela Wiedenbeck, iTichaona Chinyelu, iAnita Shaw, iMargaret Mullings, iJ. Allen Wilson, iPaul Lonardo, iRoger Vizi, iDavid Arthur Walters, iJeff Ovall, iMiller Caldwell, i

  Home > Inspirational > Poetry        Popular: Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry        Authors: A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U V W X Y Z     

andrea coltman

 Follow Me  

· Contact Me
· Poetry
· Stories
· 86 Titles
· 967 Reviews
· Save to My Library
· Share with Friends!
·
Member Since: Dec, 2003

andrea coltman, click here to update your pages on AuthorsDen.



You Were My World
by andrea coltman → (All Poetry by andrea coltman)
   Rated "G" by the Author.
Share   Print  Save   Follow   Share on Facebook


Poem Artwork

You Were My World

 

I cried for you long before you died

My pain over you, lies deep inside

Everywhere I go, I can no longer hide

Where to go? I can not decide

 

Time eases the pain that I hold

A story?  A tale? It’s fiction, I’m told

I once hoped to die before I’m old

But now? The very thought leaves me cold

 

Turn the clocks back to how it was before

To hear you turn the key in the door

To feel your footsteps on the floor

Your presence was here; it is no more

 

Stop the clocks, sit still in time

Hold my hand and I’ll feel fine

There is no reason, no rhyme

For you; I will always pine

 

You were my world; my dusk, my dawn

My sun bringing promise to the golden corn

You gave me life; with you I was born

Let the seed grow to a grassy lawn

 

© Andrea Coltman

 

 

 


Want to review or comment on this poem?


Need a FREE Reader Membership?


 Reviews of "You Were My World"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on November 26, 2004
Soul-wrenching write, Andrea. Very moving and powerfully meaningful. Love and peace and best wishes to you. Regis

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on November 25, 2004
Good to meet you, Andrea, and do I detect from your Biog that you are another of us Brits here at the Den? This poem is deeply moving and steeped in an agonising pain that refuses to be numbed. It cries out from the depths of the soul and disturbs the senses. I feel for the pain expressed in this and pray that as each layer of grief is shed, healing and resolution may follow in its wake. There are no words for this, but may you be comforted in the knowledge that there will be light, eventually, at the end of the dark tunnel as night gives way to day. May you journey in safety. God bless, Kate x

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on November 24, 2004
Beautiful poetry but then i have come to know when i visit your den it is always so beautiful and meaningful ANDREA.

Ladye Peg

Happy Holidays


Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on November 24, 2004
Blimy Andrea, this is very moving, one can hear the cry..

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on November 23, 2004
very beautiful, moving poetry!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on November 23, 2004
Andrea I think this is at the top of the list of your poems!It
is very beautifully written with exquisite expression!Kudo's!

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on November 23, 2004
This is so elegantly expressed......whoever this is........I am sure knows......that they live on in your spirt.......pax A

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on November 23, 2004
Most beautiful Andrea!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on November 23, 2004
Andrea,

Poetically as beautiful as the image - deeply compassionate, "You Were My World" 'speaks' with eloquence - all from the heart!!

Best wishes,

Robert

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on November 23, 2004
The endearing, aching beauty of this brought my tears Andrea, outstanding work.

Reviewed by Magnus Rater (Reader)
Reviewed on November 23, 2004
The paradox of eternal loss!

For some so painful - to others it is "the king is dead, long live the king"!

Yes ... the teethmarks of reality.

Thank you, Andrea!


Reviewed on November 23, 2004
"You Were My World" - glows, and from the breath of gratitude forms rainbows of Perseverance under the Sun of Love.

This is a poetic tray of ambrosias... A full couse meal to be served through the millennia.

Healthy Blissful Day, Poet!

Thank You for adding flowers to the Vase of Poetry.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU


New Poetry by andrea coltman
Popular Poetry (Inspirational)
  1.  Cowboy in Heaven
  2.  I'm Thankful
  3.  The Fragments of Hatred...
  4.  Dolly Parton
  5.  HELLO SEPTEMBER
  6.  YOUR...AIR
  7.  MY COAT
  8.  A Praying Wife
  9.  The Apple Orchard
  10.  My Name Is , I Am
  11.  The Rose
  12.  A Letter to Emily
  13.  Heaven’s Fishing Hole
  14.  War
  15.  The Heartfelt Gift
  16.  In Awe
  17.  Creator Of The Stars
  18.  What Are We...Really?
  19.  77 YEARS AGO, TODAY
  20.  My Glowing Fire Fly
Free Book Review Program
Select a book to read and review today!

Pearls of Wisdom: A Smart Dog's Tale by William Cottringer

Pearly Girl figures this wisdom coming from her dog tale is more apt to take hold than coming from any self-help human writer  
Member BookAds

Reflections and Treasured Wonders by Margaret Evans

From the Caribbean Sea to Machu Picchu in Peru, and from birds to flowers and butterflies, Reflections and Treasured Wonders offers a collection of images gathered from around the world.  
Member BookAds

RE-DRAFTING in 2023-- Reedisms To Edu-lighten Your Cultural Mind Guide by Cynth'ya Reed

Note: Since my husband's cancer surgery 4/25/05, this book content has been integrated into the public speaking content for audiences interested in a sassy approach to personal and/or community awareness events. Another chapbook on intimate love poet  
Member BookAds