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When the Sun Sets
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When the Sun Sets

 

When the sun goes down

And we go to bed

When we close our eyes

I reflect on what was said

 

All those angry words

Fighting talk hurts

Maybe we were hasty

Maybe blunt and often curt

 

At the end of the day

All is said; all is done

I still thought I loved you

And you were the only one

 

After the screams and the swearing

When I put up my wall

You hit back at me

In the bedroom, bathroom and hall

 

I shut myself in, close, lock the latch

You shout, and yell; I cry

My tears, my fears, my fault

Yes? No? But I dare to ask why

 

You sleep on the sofa

I cry myself to sleep

You forget, you turn over

And enjoy your frolicking sheep

 

© Andrea Coltman

 

 



 
 

 


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 Reviews of "When the Sun Sets"
Reviewed by Linda Roman
Reviewed on January 4, 2005
sad, yet nicely done

Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)
Reviewed on January 4, 2005
Wow, this is very intense. An excellent show of emotion in this poem.

Reviewed on January 3, 2005
Andrea,

Truly sad and heart-wrenching - penned to poetic excellence!!


Best wishes,

Robert

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on January 2, 2005
A sad but powerful creation, Andrea. Love, peace and strength to you.

Regis

Reviewed on January 1, 2005
We've all been there at one time or another. A well-written piece!

Happy New Year, Andrea!

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart
Reviewed on December 30, 2004
Words like that can echo through till morning. I hope you have better sunsets than this.

Reviewed by D May (Reader)
Reviewed on December 30, 2004
Sad and well expressed.

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Reviewed on December 30, 2004
Tinka said it for me
painfully sad...........nicely done

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on December 30, 2004
Sounds familiar Andrea, sad to say! Maybe someday we'll learn how to relate to each other.If we live that long;-)Take care, Happy New Year!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on December 30, 2004
Painfully sad Andrea!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on December 30, 2004
I agree with Anna but then why must women always feel it is their fault? An excellent peom.

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on December 30, 2004
So sad, Andrea, and yet I believe all of us could relate to that
scenario at one time or another in our lives.
I have come to since follow the biblical advice to "Not let the
sun set with you in your anger." It works wonders.
A well written poem, dear girl.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on December 30, 2004
Sadly, far too many have undergone similar situations - when the sun sets.

A very powerful message and statement, Andrea.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on December 30, 2004
Can't imagine you with a bad temper?

So sad, sounds horiffic..

Hope the new year is you best-est, my little chum..

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on December 30, 2004
Andrea,
A very sad but so often the same scenario in many lives. They never change..it's not love..love doesn't hurt.
I just hope your writing from 'past' experience.

Lisa


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