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Hustler
by andrea coltman → (All Poetry by andrea coltman)
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The fabulous art is by Christine Comyn, a current favorite of mine.


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Hustler


 

And as the celluloid reels through her brain

She needs you in the thunder and the rain

As she throws her stockings on the chair

She knows your image is imprinted there

 

And when the daylight comes

Illusions are no more; truth becomes

A focal point in time

As he slips away from the perfect crime

 

When she picks up her earnings

She can’t forget those yearnings

And looks at that old chair

With your image imprinted there

 

All alone again

Your image; her guardian

But then in a little while

Her love will stand trial

As another slips in through the door

And she performs her chore

 

It’s been four years since he died

And her heart stopped love inside

But even in her deepest, darkest despair

His image remains in that chair

 

© Andrea Coltman

 

 
 

 


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 Reviews of "Hustler"
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on January 15, 2005
Deep insightful emotional write. Fantastic!

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Reviewed on January 15, 2005
bravo...bravo
could make for a wonderful story!!!
wonderful picture!!!

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
Reviewed on January 14, 2005
Excellent piece here Andrea...I really liked the way you built this around that super fantastic painting...both well done.

Allen

Reviewed by Handsum Hart
Reviewed on January 13, 2005
Poetic and gripping, a splendid write, I shall chew on some more.

Take care

Reviewed on January 13, 2005
Lovely painting and wonderful write.

Sandie May Angel :o)

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on January 13, 2005
depair has a way of settling in ...

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on January 13, 2005
Gently told, of someone with feelings of inner pain..

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on January 13, 2005
It is heart wrenching. Great write!

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on January 13, 2005
heart wrenching...portrays the sadness and longing for yesterday, the desperate necessity of today

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 13, 2005
Andrea you captured this poor soul to perfection!
Fantastic writing,you go to another rung with this one!

Love Eileen

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on January 13, 2005
Powerful piece Andrea!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on January 13, 2005
Yes they are all right and I was captivated by this poem.

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on January 13, 2005
wow
you created a story just with these few lines...........
excellent!

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on January 13, 2005
Such a poignant portrait of despair.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on January 13, 2005
A powerfully sad heartwrenching poem, Andrea.


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