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Moon
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I can sense the moon watching me


From its unfair vantage point, beyond


Windows with curtains drawn tight


Against that baleful gaze, an exercise


In futility because I drift inward to


Where its presence lays, thoughts


That ride the hidden places forged


Of moonbeams, here, beneath the


Skin of consciousness, a place of


Shattered glass and broken shutters.


 


A nowhere place of blackened walls


Made damp with countless unshed


Tears, marred with splintered claws


That have done little to scratch the


Surface of who I am, but linger on


In crimson pools of words unspoken,


They have trickled down from those


Jagged grooves to form an uneasy


Mixture of bitter possibilities, a strange


Concoction from which I dip my cup.


 


My face reflected back at me


Like a moon trapped in amber…


 


END


 


“Moon”


 


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 Reviews of "Moon"
Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on March 4, 2005
i like your work

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on February 5, 2005
Good powerful stuff George!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on February 5, 2005
Powerfully Good!!

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on February 5, 2005
this is wonderful
pax A

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on February 4, 2005
Emotionally and meaningfully introspective, George. Well composed and thank you for sharing. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on February 4, 2005
the pyschological landscape of this poem reflects the longings of the lunar self and the conceptual being caught up in its own relfection, determined to understand its duplicity ...

outstanding poem!


Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on February 4, 2005
You have such a gift George!Bringing words to life like a master painting. You never fail to color your words even when they are
stark and desolate. Superb poem!

etw

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on February 4, 2005
Yes Sue is correct and this one is also spellbinding.

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on February 4, 2005
this is so good, the mood of desolation comes thru right away, a sense of longing for something different. i liked it alot

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on February 4, 2005
Amazing!! This week I have written a poem on the theme of the blankness of reflecting back the light of an iceberg from the deep recesses of a frozen inner landscape. It is far less penetrating than this absolutely absorbing and evocative write, George. Your powers of description and imagery are superb and the whole is a uniquely conceived and executed, tight, write. This certainly has that "tingle" factor and I am sure will strike many chords deep within those places that we can't, maybe, quite put a finger on. Thank you for this. Just brilliant! Kate xx

Reviewed by Carrie Deveney
Reviewed on February 4, 2005
Very good poem. Wonderful imagery. I really liked it. :)

Reviewed on February 4, 2005
i like the imagery in this write, george! so well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D


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