A little Fantasy-Horror . . . not my ususal thing...experimenting a bit...
The Feeding
Whisper. Whisper, breezes past, palms her cheek. “my sugarplum” and blows on pixie bangs . . . Whose hand skims her brow, and kisses pouting lips, light as a wish? Who chills the heavens sliding down bare arms, squeezing tender flesh, loving the delicacy . . . and away.
Into the clear ringing round , she searches, curious, where the harbinger of this voice, where the lips of this deliverer? Only air, deserted street, cat, who stirs, on old veranda . . . Nothing perceptible save the sigh once exchanged. Her mouth curls sadly, . . the kiss was so sweet, cotton-candy honey.
Setting low the afternoon sun, skipping rope down to the gate, back to cat, now sandman’s captive, she sings to the purring of the wind, wiggles to the hum of the nursery. whimsy rhymes, whimsy round, whisper . . . Cinderella kissed a fella.
Musing upon his shoulder, it floats on a hush whisper, fondles his ear, sings him her rhyme, drifting in and out of perception a soft caress, whisper taunts “my sugarplum” obscured only. . . never absent The damp grass groans with the crush of his step, and the startled cat hisses, “Who owns an augur’s tongue, licking this hound’s loins so cunningly? What beast prepares a blind alley and lays out this vile feast?”
Setting low the afternoon sun, smiling to the hum of the nursery, he laughs at the cowardly cat, and rests a hand on the quavering gate. Wicked rhymes Wicked round Screaming. . . Her fella comes for sugarplum.
Very imaginative; this leaves the reader wanting a story. Well done, Jeanne René. (Out of curiosity, I wonder why you spell "René" in the masculine form of the French name. The feminine form is "Renée. You don't have to tell me.) Thanks for sharing this. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Reviewed by kindra garber (Reader)
Reviewed on January 14, 2005
That is really good and i like your structure of your poem. please read some of mine and tell me what you think.
The fortunate inherit riches, prestige, positive notoriety. Those not so lucky bear legacies filled with poverty, infamy or, worse yet, the unhinged insanity and murderous urges of their ancestors.
Chris has been fostered at the Crowley boot camp since he turned seven. At sixteen, he is finally ready to run away because his foster father is an abusive person who works Chris and the other children to the point of exhaustion. All he has left of h
Regis
(((HUGS))) and much love, your tx. friend, karen lynn. :)
a master word portrait! It will haunt
whenever it is viewed. Excellent work!
Love, Eileen
Sandie May Angel :o)
I like this. Very imaginative. Reminds me a bit of " The Entity "