Breathing oxygen of oils and turpentine,
I waited,
Unfinished shade of monotone,
Left against a dusty wall
Gathering time
And moot dreams.
Until that night
He entered uninvited,
Scattering jars of exhausted brushes,
And crusted palettes in a fury of salvation.
Ripping moth worn drapery,
Pushing out stale air through cracked glass.
Lifting me to an empty easel
He postured gaily,
“Ah, gray child
You have stayed to be my masterpiece,”
And threw colors at my canvas.
“I will paint you as light, my dear.
Place rose red blush to your cheek,
Silhouette drawn with blossom lined path
In the arms of old yews and muted greenery.
I will sketch you a Japanese bridge
to linger the afternoon~ a crossing over lazy water lilies”
In dreams
He creates without thought.
A dress of purple iris,
A cape of swaying poppies,
And tresses of yellow poplar leaves
dancing on an easy breeze . . . his eye renders ...
“I will give you dainty parasol clouds
Drifting above meandering rivers
And cliffs that greet the crash of sea waters.
Most crucial, child, I will paint you
As soft grass upon which lovers lie.”
With grasses rendered,
He threw brushes over his shoulder
And contemplated the image.
Across the lips a smile of satisfaction played.
So to the window,
Looking for daybreak, laughing
He set my portrait flying against the sky cerulean blue.
jeanne rené 10/04
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Reviews of "Portrait by Monet Uninvited"
Reviewed by Jerry Andrews (Reader)
Reviewed on June 9, 2006
Monet and Van Gogh are my two favorites and always will be. This is a lush poem, impressionistic, like Monet's work. The only two writers I've read here who can touch you are Candy Gourlay and Dani. I don't read much or write much, lately. Just not inspired. Spend most of my time on the computer playing internet chess. I love sitting across from another man and trying to outthink him. I guess I'll never outgrow that love of the challenge and competition. I seem to have been competing in one way or another, for this prize or that, since I can remember. It's in the genes, I think. Read me, review me, tell me what you think. Thanks- Jerry Andrews