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inhabitants
by JR Sweeney → (All Poetry by JR Sweeney)
Friday, July 8, 2016    Not rated by the Author.
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quick rhyme about people i have known

inhabitants
the world is black like my friend jack
face like a butt with a sideways crack

the world is hell like my friend mel
doin eight to ten in his stinky little cell

the world is white like my friend dwight
always talkin shit until its time for a fight

the world is ill like my friend bill
knocks up a sister then goes in for the kill

the world is brown like that loco clown
chico from the PJ'S always lets you down

the world is sad like my friends dad
beatin up on moms makes him feel real glad

the world is yellow like that little fellow
you know that guy i think he plays the cello

the world is mean like my friend dean
smash your head for a rock then he flees the scene

the world is red most of them are dead
dwight the white came over and shot them in the head

the worlds in despair like my friend claire
painted nails, painted toes, weaves in her hair
does anything to please me she puts me on a shelf
i can't save claire so i pray and save myself
 

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 Reviews of "inhabitants"
Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on September 25, 2016

well said!!




Reviewed by Eva Pasco
Reviewed on July 8, 2016
Your poem has an urban beat conveying the despair of its inhabitants where escape from such an environment takes determination through the power of prayer.


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