Wonderful write! Very imaginative and creative. I like how you had done a role reversal on this one. - Like we are not watching the clock, rather, it's the clock watching us.
Nicely done. I enjoyed this one very much. Especially, they have ticked and tocked the lives of some old folks older than even I. I love the imagery that this line produces.
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Enter the pages of diaspora in quiet introspection. Bathe your thoughts with subtle humor; synchronize your spirit-sense with history-in-heat; fall headlong with eyes wide open into
This collection of poetry addresses the nature of time, reflections on the natural world, the difficulty of loss,
contemporary social issues and gratitude for life.
Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)
M.Rose