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At The Porter Cellar Bar
by Kate Burnside → (All Poetry by Kate Burnside)
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A miscellany of perhaps fifty
loosely gathered in a small arched
subterranean cavern
beneath the streets of Georgian Bath

Surging alternating waves
of chatter and laughter are
randomly borne
on intoxication's breeze,
merging with the smudgy
paintwork on the walls
to produce the comforting aura
of a psychedelic sixties
lava lamp

The singer songwriter plays
a pulsing rhythmic tune
on his electric acoustic guitar,
penetrating the atmosphere
with soulful artistic determination:
"I love you
like a melody
that's running through my head..."

He closes his eyes and brushes
the microphone with his lips,
ignoring the teenage underage drinkers
making a play for his mates
in the front row

These blokes work hard to keep
their arms and hands away from
anything that might be construe d
as welcome or responsibility,
hugging instead their beer
close to their chest

Two older girls
blankly silent
and ranged along
the side seating
look on with
all the rapt attention
of watching paint dry

The languorous youth
lurking in shadow
leans against a pillar.
Like a musing Benedictine
he is shrouded deep
in his hoody and
is maybe considering
his next deal

Bar manager stands
arms folded at the back
and does a quick head count
- profit or loss tonight?

A beautiful acoustic riff
from the associate musician
on stage
breaks in like an
ascendant lark on the wings
of spring;
has his wife remembered
to record The Big Match
on Channel 3?

* * * *

As for me, all I'm thinking is:
"I love you
like a melody
that's running through my head"...

I'm glad someone
is concentrating;
he deserves it

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 Reviews of "At The Porter Cellar Bar"
Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on March 9, 2008
...what wonderful thoughts you have penned here Kate...so focused on a deserving melody...yet how you paint the bar atmosphere...as if 360 degrees meant nothing...to a revolution...one takes it all in...this cavern.

excellent images and work Kate...

John

Reviewed by Marco Landi (Reader)
Reviewed on April 16, 2004
Excellent work Brava

Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on April 16, 2004
From a smoke filled ambience comes the smell of fresh air; brought to us from your quill Ladt Kate. When I read your work, I long to be a white knight of old and your leige forever. Bill

Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart
Reviewed on April 16, 2004
Very enjoyable slice of life. Like a living snapshot.

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on April 16, 2004
Kate, your work is very sound and most impressive......ty, Dani

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
Reviewed on April 16, 2004
BRILLIANT flow and imagery is dense...wonderful figure of speech usage!

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott
Reviewed on April 16, 2004
Very well written, enjoyable to read! Terrific imagery, excellent form.

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on April 16, 2004
I really enjoyed this, Kate!
It reminded me of the first bar the Beatles worked in, after
local folks began to take them more seriously.
You describe this very much like the picture in their biography.

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on April 16, 2004
Kate this is wonderful...you do free verse
so well...amidst all the noise and clamour
your in your own thoughts here...loved the
scene...you took me there...floria


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