Rise Up (poem) by Kate Burnside on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on June 6, 2004

A most creative write, enjoy your sunrise

Blue skies and sunshine
HH

Reviewed on June 6, 2004

awesome, potent poetry!

Reviewed on June 6, 2004

Yeah their seems to be a lot of coming out, that is of misery in AD lately, you rose up, I turned the page LOL, aint life grand, when you finally find it with faith.

Top write Kate.
Ch'erie

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on June 6, 2004

Beautiful, just beautiful and inspiring poetry!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on June 6, 2004

Outstanding piece, Kate.

So glad to hear that you have learned to soar and sing like the birds and whales.

Well Done; and may you continue to soar - and sing - forever.

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on June 6, 2004

WOW! Your poem is a power-house!

Your lines are lucid and very strong.....very well written......ty, Dani

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on June 5, 2004

Upligtingly inspiring, Kate. Thank you for this moving and meaningful offering. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 5, 2004

Brava! Inspired writing Kate! Nothing like
reading the determination of an overcomer to
be motivated and uplifted. Great write!
You are brave, too!;-)

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)

Reviewed on June 5, 2004

This was so well written!

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on June 5, 2004

Kate - an absolutely stunning conclusion to this poem of resurfacing. Loved this one!

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on June 5, 2004

wow.......beautiful
i have alot of catching up to do with your poetry! I will return Kate!
pax.......really pax!!! Anita

Reviewed by Antoinette Kopperfield

Reviewed on June 5, 2004

Kate, this is a wonderful write with so much thought and deep,deep feelings! Keep writing...
Antoinette

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on June 5, 2004

Kate,

WOW now this one I can relate to again......
"Yet as the songbird
learns to sing
during that
hour of darkness
just before the dawn,
I know I shall be
in full voice
to greet my Sun
as she rises...

Out to sea
the Great Beasts
are surfacing

There is an awakening,
the earth is moving

The song of the whales
is mine

And we shall not
be extinct"

Finding and discoverong yourself after being hidden is one of the most revealing aspects of life.....
Awesome Kate! ;0

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on June 5, 2004

Hi Kate,
This wonderful write
has a powerful one two punch....

Bravo!!!!

Trixie :)

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

Reviewed on June 5, 2004

Very powerful awakening, Poet Kate Burnside!!! I enjoyed the read. Thank you for sharing it.

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on June 5, 2004

"Rise Up"... I see two poems here. The second begins on the fifth stanza, and both are poetic grand.

I salute You, Sublime Poet!

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on June 5, 2004

Sounds like a wonderful long-awaited awakening. Powerful poem, Kate.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on June 5, 2004

Very vivid. congrats on going to creative writing, don't lose your originality, but as I was talking on phone we spoke how good your poems are, cross genre and comments that show how well you have understood the write, and give sound as a pound advice or encouragement..PS is he really alive and kicking:))

All ways be you..