Years' later
she still washes her hands
every five minutes
to get rid of the smell,
the foul-smelling stench:
Of him
Light switches
every time she enters a room:
On-off, on-off
1, 2, 3, 4, 5
1, 2, 3, 4, 5
Night sweats
Night terrors
And always the smell:
Foul breath
Old B.O.
Fresh ejaculation
...Meanwhile
years' later
he sleeps a troubled sleep
amidst the pain of liquid dreams,
wet-dreaming of being yet
wrapped in the arms
of the perfumed mother
who left him alone
as a little child
and walked away
without so much as
a backward glance
how our souls are truly so different yet intertwined in ways unimaginable....everything we do effects life itself
wonderful heart/thought-provoking piece
This poem revealed much empathy love and pain and understanding toward the subject characters involved in it.It touched me deeply and tugged at all the sorrow in my heart.The writer of it obviously is a deep kind sympathetic soul with a very great gift to expose the ugliness of life with a kind soft gentle touch.Well done on this masterpiece.
Yes, Ted, and sadly too many women as well... each one a product of their own damage and pain. Compounded damage and fallout abound, making people's lives a misery at every twist and turn. Kate xx
"Tortured Soul" is a sensitive and poignant reflection on abuse and neglect. Those who were subject to such treatment, will continue to impart it on others -- the vicious cycle continues. One very terrific poem.
Carmen :-)
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on June 29, 2004
Cut to the chase would you? Too many men are this way.
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wonderful heart/thought-provoking piece
Not an easy topic to write on. You've done well...
depths of agony our soul must endure in this world!
Exceptional poetry! Your compassion is palpable!
outstanding!
Awesome.....
HUGS
LADY P
you are some writer kate!
pax.........A
You are supremely gifted, no doubt about it.
Well said kitty kate...
Reindeer
Well Done, Kate.
Carmen :-)