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Tortured Soul
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TORTURED SOUL


Years' later
she still washes her hands
every five minutes
to get rid of the smell,
the foul-smelling stench:
Of him

Light switches
every time she enters a room:
On-off, on-off
1, 2, 3, 4, 5
1, 2, 3, 4, 5

Night sweats
Night terrors
And always the smell:
Foul breath
Old B.O.
Fresh ejaculation


...Meanwhile
years' later
he sleeps a troubled sleep
amidst the pain of liquid dreams,
wet-dreaming of being yet
wrapped in the arms
of the perfumed mother

who left him alone
as a little child
and walked away
without so much as
a backward glance

Promptly forgetting him

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 Reviews of "Tortured Soul"
Reviewed on July 2, 2004
Power write on a subject that is very painful.
Tommy

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Reviewed on July 2, 2004
how our souls are truly so different yet intertwined in ways unimaginable....everything we do effects life itself
wonderful heart/thought-provoking piece

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
Reviewed on July 1, 2004
This poem revealed much empathy love and pain and understanding toward the subject characters involved in it.It touched me deeply and tugged at all the sorrow in my heart.The writer of it obviously is a deep kind sympathetic soul with a very great gift to expose the ugliness of life with a kind soft gentle touch.Well done on this masterpiece.

Reviewed by Harbhajan Sandhu
Reviewed on July 1, 2004
Penetrating lament. Adroitly crafted verse.

Reviewed by M Flack
Reviewed on July 1, 2004
Dark and very Gothic in style...
Not an easy topic to write on. You've done well...

Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)
Reviewed on June 30, 2004
Wow- this has such depth of emotion- the beginning makes you want to look away, but you can't. Well-done.

Reviewed on June 30, 2004
Poetic genius - mastery of the written word Kate - terrific prose! Robert.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 30, 2004
Kate You have me rivited with this one! Oh my the
depths of agony our soul must endure in this world!
Exceptional poetry! Your compassion is palpable!

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on June 30, 2004
this extrememly powerful poem takes hold of the reader and refuses to let go ...

outstanding!

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on June 29, 2004
Whoa kate this is so deep deep deep and surreal this one is one awesome piece sweet friend.....
Awesome.....

HUGS
LADY P

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on June 29, 2004
oh my goodness.......this sounds like the middle of a novel.....so sad....and so vivid......
you are some writer kate!
pax.........A

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on June 29, 2004
A cauterizing stab of the heart, Kate!
You are supremely gifted, no doubt about it.

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on June 29, 2004
WOW!!! Absolutely heartwrenching write Kate!!!… Just feel like I was kicked in the stomach, Poet!!! Excellent work!!!

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on June 29, 2004
Made me think of MacBeth at first. But you really did hit the nail on head Kate.

Well said kitty kate...

Reviewed on June 29, 2004
Wow..powerful and outstanding, this moves the heart so deeply,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on June 29, 2004
So terribly terribly sad, and such a powerful poem.

Well Done, Kate.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on June 29, 2004
This is so powerful and almost too painful to read.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on June 29, 2004
Yes, Ted, and sadly too many women as well... each one a product of their own damage and pain. Compounded damage and fallout abound, making people's lives a misery at every twist and turn. Kate xx

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
Reviewed on June 29, 2004
"Tortured Soul" is a sensitive and poignant reflection on abuse and neglect. Those who were subject to such treatment, will continue to impart it on others -- the vicious cycle continues. One very terrific poem.

Carmen :-)

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on June 29, 2004
Cut to the chase would you? Too many men are this way.


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