He Left Me... (poem) by Kate Burnside on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on September 30, 2012

nicely done

Reviewed on June 9, 2008

I do like the irish sayings, songs and everything. They are such joyful people and always leave a message to their songs etc.

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero

Reviewed on August 21, 2004

Great mood, great visual, and good form makes this poem very effective. I really enjoyed the reading.

Carmen :-)

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on August 19, 2004

Kate....I can sense happiness, pain, hunger, love and bitterness in this great write of yours...This I think came straight from your heart....I would call this poem," A waltz of your heart",since this looks so realistic in nature...sorry if I am wrong...But after reading this I could not control my tears....This touched me very very deeply....And this is that sort of poem which will forever encircle in my heart....

He left me with a child today
He left me with a child -
And all his smile, his kiss, his way
is in his infant styled

This is metaphysical in nature and I loved the ending of this great write....cheers...love n luck....BHUWAN

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on August 19, 2004

luv the mood and tempo of this poem ...

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on August 19, 2004

Great pace here and the story is one so many can tell. Your timeless writes have a way of bringing memories and tears Kate. Well done girl!
Susan

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on August 19, 2004

Love the tempo, Nice write from merrie ole England...

Kingdom Kate

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on August 19, 2004

that last stanza makes the poem!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on August 19, 2004

Great write, very creative!

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on August 19, 2004

Well penned and thought provoking.

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on August 19, 2004

"He Left Me..." is a masterful poetic expression set artistically to sound under the rhythm of emotions of true Poetry.

I salute You, Sublime Poet!

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on August 19, 2004

What a lovely poem! This was wonderful Kate!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)

Reviewed on August 19, 2004

What a refreshing turnabout, Kate me girl...I loved these
positive lines...made my morning. But, then again, you
usually do.
A great piece!

Reviewed by William DeVault

Reviewed on August 19, 2004

I enjoyed this, very much, it reads well and leaves one with a lingering smile for the child's reflection of the man.

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on August 19, 2004

you are so unique.........love this......i can hear the melody :)

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on August 19, 2004

Beautiful and heart-warming poem. Loved much

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga

Reviewed on August 19, 2004

Dear Kate,

How very naughty "He" is, a kiss a smile a frown ooohhh and then a child!! I guess some of them are the same world over!! great write Kate. LLess complex than the previous one, I'll do it off the board though ~~my thoughts:)

Warm hugs
Elga

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on August 19, 2004

Very creative. Enjoyed... as always.