He would gather all of summer's petals
and lay a path beneath her feet;
No thorn or stone would harm her
She sweeps the full arc
of the heavens
with the beam of her bright eyes,
bringing all the cosmic lights
together to thread amidst
his wild majestic mane;
He will be dazzling to behold
Looking on,
who can fathom the depths
of such a love
or such a union?
Softly swollen fleshly lips
feeding tearing jaw of ivory muzzle
anathema to the heart and mind
But their very souls are One;
Breathing the same air
they are of the Same Root,
the Shared Vine:
He the grapes of wrath
She the grapes of wine
Theirs is the Vintage
beyond our comprehension;
Sweet Elixir of Heaven
completely untasted
by those whose mirror-image
reflects back to them
only that which they already know
Whose Wells of Life
are from a single source
of their own making
Stunning imagery and visuals in this metaphorical masterpiece...
Your talent shines like a beacon here Kate
And your love of the divine is self evident
Perfection...
Peter
Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on September 30, 2004
Kate, your natural poetic ability to transform a black and white canvass into a vivid colored timeless portrait, is a shining testament of your creative genius. This remarkable piece is absolutely striking, in both style and substance. Thank you for sharing your wonderful creations. Take care and be well.
jaw dropping imagery, heart pounding romance...SIGGHHHH! a delightful beauty this one is--BRAVA! i'm in agreement, one of your best!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. *a keeper, thank you*
Such beauty of expression, superb descriptions, wondrous imagery!
WOW!Kudo's!
of the heavens" < This is poetry. What a line!
From myth to reality this poem achieves its end. It touched the senses and emotions. Great job, Kate.
Carmen :-)
She the grapes of wine
Theirs is the Vintage
excellent in content and strong images carried through. tell us about school as it unfolds! Dawn
Great write here, with so many discriptions of beauty.
Your'll be tops back at school.. A Klassic Kate...
wish i wrote it!!!
ahhhhhhhh
very human write kate......wow....speechless here!
anita :)
I especially love this line:
"He the grapes of wrath...she the grapes of wine."
It has a subtle flow, yet a depth that raps one on the head
and opens the door of imaginings.
Your talent shines like a beacon here Kate
And your love of the divine is self evident
Perfection...
Peter