Hold Me Lovingly (poem) by Kate Burnside on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on October 25, 2004

Great use of metaphor, Kate. I love your insight here. This is very lovely and inspiring. Thank you for sharing this gem with us.

Carmen :-)

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

Reviewed on October 24, 2004

Kate, your romantic poetry continues to bring tremendous relief for ones soul, my friend. This creative piece has all the right ingredients to allow one to sift through the awful predicaments of life. It helps to know that with the right partner there isn�t any emotions or thoughts left unopened. Thank you for sharing your work. Take good care and be well.

Reviewed by Janet Parker

Reviewed on October 24, 2004

Excellent write. I like the flow and especially the last stanza.

Reviewed by Handsum Hart

Reviewed on October 24, 2004

Very impressive, roundly beautiful and poetic

Joy and starlight
HH

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on October 24, 2004

exceptional use of analogy ... this had just the proper balance of motion in it ...

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on October 24, 2004

Heart touching write with great skill.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on October 24, 2004

Supurb, Kate, especially the last stanza.

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on October 23, 2004

Oh wow, Kate. This is both romantic and original, filled with great lines. Love "let me be the unseen object..." and that last line is exquisite. Dawn

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on October 23, 2004

Wow... for I am nothing if left unopen... What a line! Excellent poetry.

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on October 23, 2004

Sweet and inspiring Kate
Straight from the heart...
Peter

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on October 23, 2004

This is all I asked of my love. This is all he could not give. Cold and vrutal but alas! there is this poem and the fact that love can come again. I'll wait. Thanks for your poem Kate. There is hope for someone like me.
Still....
Susan

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 23, 2004

Oh my! What can I say, magnificent!

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on October 23, 2004

Yes, you've said it all. Wonderful write indeed, Kate!

Sandie May Angel :o)

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on October 23, 2004

excellent!!!!!!!!!!!!

this is so intimate.......love it!!!

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on October 23, 2004

HEre's BIG HUG,i.e. Hot Romantci Write!

TRASK

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on October 23, 2004

(((kate)))

i can see why it's one of your favorites--o, this is excellent! that's all the writer wants, is to be held and read and RECOGNIZED! you most certainly are--wonderful write!

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)