As if trying to take its shape,
my mind wraps itself around
the delicate figure of an image on a page.
As if trying to kiss its form,
my emotion engages with the sensual beauty
of a thought that is linguistically expressed.
As if trying to learn their dance,
my heart moves to the music
of your words playing in my soul.
Your poetry is the precious pyre
from which this Phoenix arises.
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Reviews of "Reincarnate"
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on October 27, 2004
Love it!
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on October 27, 2004
Oh Kate what a thing of beauty this is.. the symbolism, the fire, just gorgeous soulful poetry.
Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on October 27, 2004
Kate, you continue to blaze new horizons with your gifted quill. This piece just breathes and takes on a life of its own! Absolutely pointed creativity at its finest, my friend. Thank you for sharing it. Take care and be well.
Your poetry is the precious pyre
from which this Phoenix arises.
Kate...its so good to read you yet again...I was busy with the kids....Today am bit free and I am reading the poems of my favorites here....You have left me speechless with this gem of a write...what a write...superb ending....you are getting better and better...cheers...love n luck....all the best....BHUWAN
This is perfection, Kate! Images, emotions, flow, you nailed it all. You have combined the heart, soul, mind and muse, I felt like I was walking around in your thoughts.
Take care,
Sherry
My book of poetry is being redone by me, I have a beautiful cover designed and the book will have a few more than 200 poems in it. I am going to have it printed on demand here in Canada. When it is done I will let you know when it is done and if anyo
Selected poems from previous & forthcoming collections together with Q&R apps on each page to enable audio rendition simultaneously with the written text
as strongly as the emotions you unveiled within this outstanding poem.
Wayne
from which this Phoenix arises.
Kate...its so good to read you yet again...I was busy with the kids....Today am bit free and I am reading the poems of my favorites here....You have left me speechless with this gem of a write...what a write...superb ending....you are getting better and better...cheers...love n luck....all the best....BHUWAN
Reindeer
Take care,
Sherry
cryptic message....
Done with depth of emotion and grace..
Peter
Keep posting Your Flowers, Poet!
Health and Creativity.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Excellent!
TRASK