You entered my room - just the sound of your distant Voice.
The chill of winter fell from your clothes as they closed about me;
petals of ice dropped from your heavy boots.
Your speech patterns and rhythms were slow
and disconnected, eschewing the deep thoughts
of one journeying through long years in space;
someone fallen into a huge crevasse,
or lost on some lonely mountain top.
* * * * *
Papier-mache man, fragments of endless books and knowledge
encase you in monotone syllables.
How I long to decorate you with my garden colours:
It's your heart that would be painted first,
from which all other shades could bleed.
There might yet be a melting thaw
and a spring tide gushing through frozen veins.
* * * * *
In the corner of a room closed to all but dark and dustcovers,
long undisturbed and silent,
a butterfly awakes and beats
freshly-opened wings against frosted window panes.
your imagery is alive, one doesn't read your poetry, they live it (have i said that before?). GAD!!!!!!!!!! such power! such talent! such jealousy *sighhhh* WISH I'D WRITTEN THIS!
Kate, your natural ability to weave words and phrases into a well-structured creation, continues to enlighten and impress your many admirers and followers, which I am grateful to be one. I loved this part, my friend. “In the corner of a room closed to all but dark and dustcovers, long undisturbed and silent, a butterfly awakes and beats freshly-opened wings against frosted window panes”. The words echo off the interior, and I do believe if you ever decided to pen a book it would become a best seller. Excellent work. Thank you for sharing your work. Take good care and be well.
Your descriptive words paint a vivid picture for the reader, Kate. This is truly excellent writing. I enjoyed this very much, thank you.
Take care,
Sherry
Kate you made me recall the movie with Richard Burton. such twist and turns in this story. I'm awed by the way you brought the story to fruition,beautifully done with your rare talent!
Papier-mache man, fragments of endless books and knowledge
encase you in monotone syllables.
This gives me an image of someone so fragile......the slightest pressure could tear thru the coating.......its a very strong image you have pasted here.......muuhaahaa.....
ok being serious.........
This makes me think of a pen pal........a voice.......letters......
showing a soul........more sometimes than a 3 dimensional friendship.......because of the effort extended to make the connection......which is a gift in itself.........
sweet stuff here..............anita :)
BEFORE DARKNESS FALLS Retails for 14.95 / but you can have it now for only 11.95 This is a book of poetry and prose that deals with real life issues that all of mankind comes to face. Some of the poems deal with the tenderness of love, while others s
your imagery is alive, one doesn't read your poetry, they live it (have i said that before?). GAD!!!!!!!!!! such power! such talent! such jealousy *sighhhh* WISH I'D WRITTEN THIS!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
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TRASK
Ever give it a thought...
Love
Peter
Take care,
Sherry
Papier-mache man, fragments of endless books and knowledge
encase you in monotone syllables.
This gives me an image of someone so fragile......the slightest pressure could tear thru the coating.......its a very strong image you have pasted here.......muuhaahaa.....
ok being serious.........
This makes me think of a pen pal........a voice.......letters......
showing a soul........more sometimes than a 3 dimensional friendship.......because of the effort extended to make the connection......which is a gift in itself.........
sweet stuff here..............anita :)