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Sylvia Plath's Toothbrush, 11th February 1963
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We are looking at imagination in class this week! K xx



SYLVIA PLATH'S TOOTHBRUSH, 11TH FEBRUARY 1963


Night bleeds away on the frozen razor of a snow-filled dawn.
My bristles stand sentinel like frosted strands.

The bathroom door opens and then is softly closed.
She presses her head lightly against it, and the melancholy
of her breath drifts dry-ice, wrapping me round.
The strength of her cold fist suddenly closes about me.
I am pressed hard against its severed heart line.

In the bedroom, she lifts the lid of an empty valise
and locks me inside. I am plunged into a deeper darkness.
Alone. Suffocating.

Downstairs, so is she: the kitchen door shut, the oven door



wide open.





This poem stems from notes that I have made taken from Sylvia Plath's own comments about her views on poetry and prose. Among other things, she likens the poem to a moment that changes the place of things, like the opening and closing of a door; she says that a poet becomes "an excellent packer of suitcases", containing both beginning and end in one breath. She also likens the poem to a closed fist and the novel to an open hand. And says that she has never put a toothbrush in a poem - and that, if she did, it would probably think itself singled out and rather special! The door closing in a poem does so with more manic and unanswerable finality than that of a novel.

These notes and paraphrased comments are taken from "Strong Words: Modern Poets On Modern Poetry", published by Bloodaxe in 2000.




 

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 Reviews of "Sylvia Plath's Toothbrush, 11th February 1963"
Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on December 3, 2004
Once again, I must agree with Chanti....
This is an incredible write, friend Kate. Whoever is teaching
at that school is definitely adding to your aura as a supreme
poet.
I, too, am familiar with the life of Sylvia Plath, and you
condensed it to a powerful mini-Bio in this poem.

Reviewed by Chanti Niven
Reviewed on December 1, 2004
I read this poem before I wrote the review for 'Letter from a fan' and it impacted upon my comments relating to your originality. I didn't think I could do this poem justice in my review because it is simply outstanding. I am completely crazy about the unique imagery you've used here.

"Night bleeds away on the frozen razor of a snow-filled dawn. My bristles stand sentinel like frosted strands"

I didn't want to leave a meaningless review but I couldn't remain silent. Please accept my highest praise for your incredible skill.
Chanti

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on November 29, 2004
you've packed your suitcase well!

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on November 29, 2004
Hope you take your pack lunch, chocky biscuit, apple for teacher, and leave you chewing gum under your table for the next day?

Great excercise, but don't lose the ad lib Kate...

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on November 29, 2004
An exercise in the esoteric side of poetry...actually I like to achieve a blending....and at the same time an antithesis effect in poetry and prose....

Certainly food for thought Kate...which is always stimulating...

Peter

Reviewed on November 29, 2004
(((kate)))

an intriguing challenge and write--very vivid images that settle into the reader's mind and linger--BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and love, karla.

love the sentinels part--WELL DONE!

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on November 29, 2004
you did a fine job with this, it must have been an interesting exercise.......and the notes on her writing....hmmmm
maybe thats what I need to do.....to learn the mechanics of this forum.....now i am thinking :)

applause

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on November 29, 2004
thanks for such a great sharing!

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on November 29, 2004
Imagination, extrodinaire!

Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader)
Reviewed on November 29, 2004
Thematic masterpiece. You just don't get many of these in contemporary poetry! Great job!!!!!

Reviewed by Janet Parker
Reviewed on November 29, 2004
This is interesting and very symbolic. I didn't understand this until I read your explanation.

Reviewed by D May (Reader)
Reviewed on November 29, 2004
I really like this. I love Plath's work also. Nicely done.

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on November 29, 2004
Talk about UNIQUE..WOW!!! Indeed, WHAT an IMAGINATION!!!
Seperb work..


vesna :)

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on November 29, 2004
Fantastic write, Kate, and so original! Sylvia Plath's poetry has always been a huge influence for me. Thanks for the notes you included. Dawn


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