Dear Kate,
Once again a completely unique creation from your brilliant mind! I stand in awe. Such inspiration to be found in your words. I especially loved the words 'And suddenly - There are no Yesterdays.'
Also need to commend you for superb use of diction. Many poets could also learn the effectivity of good timing from reading your work.
Fantastic!
Chanti
Could the eigth day be the "present" the "today" the "moment" that we should all be living in? Mayhaps that is so. A thought-provoking poem, Kate. Love and peace to you. Regis
I think it takes a 'third eye' to see that eigth day, Kate. I enjoyed the revitalizing feeling your piece gives me, pondering that eigth day. I think it is the day of the mind without exterior turbulence... I will be thinking on this equational addition to time until I see an answer that suits me. ... Thank you!
Power in simplicity, Kate. You have a gift for being lucid and complex at the same time. This is a beautiful poem. I'd like to go to Narnia and sleep soundly against the comfort of Aslan.
Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on December 15, 2004
This is very interesting and many times I wonder about words of a song. Excellent poem.
Chronicles of Narnia.......into the wardrobe?
Your own land of fantasy!
Lovely! If I am on the right track, I want one too!!!!
So much symbolism here........lots of brain power at work :)
Ty for this one........
I am floating with a smile.....
bravo
pax A
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Once again a completely unique creation from your brilliant mind! I stand in awe. Such inspiration to be found in your words. I especially loved the words 'And suddenly - There are no Yesterdays.'
Also need to commend you for superb use of diction. Many poets could also learn the effectivity of good timing from reading your work.
Fantastic!
Chanti
nirvana, you have found! eureka! what a glorious poem--thank you for sharing it--it is most excellent!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Makes sense of the other seven:
Wonderful! And the Ninth Day is even better - but rarely found.
Excellent!
TRASK
Your own land of fantasy!
Lovely! If I am on the right track, I want one too!!!!
So much symbolism here........lots of brain power at work :)
Ty for this one........
I am floating with a smile.....
bravo
pax A