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Eighth Day
by Kate Burnside → (All Poetry by Kate Burnside)
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EIGHTH DAY


That time...
That space...
Where all is resolved.
Where equilibrium covers
The face of my Earth
Like a nascent Noah's Flood.

Where every tear I've ever shed;
Every sigh I've ever breathed;
Every knot that's almost severed my neck

Is released, erradicated, redeemed...

* * * * *

I have only seven days -
Filled to overflowing with
Cups of both joy and pain.

But, in your Eighth Day,
Is a glorious Narnian space
Where Wardrobes and Witches
Transform into Wings and Wonder.

Your mystical Eighth Day
Makes sense of the other seven:

Without it, the cycle becomes
Merely a downward spiral, endless.

* * * * *

... You aint got nothin
But love, Sir -
Eight days a week...

And suddenly -
There are no
Yesterdays.

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 Reviews of "Eighth Day"
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on December 18, 2004
Love it!!!!!!

Reviewed by Chanti Niven
Reviewed on December 18, 2004
Dear Kate,
Once again a completely unique creation from your brilliant mind! I stand in awe. Such inspiration to be found in your words. I especially loved the words 'And suddenly - There are no Yesterdays.'
Also need to commend you for superb use of diction. Many poets could also learn the effectivity of good timing from reading your work.
Fantastic!
Chanti

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on December 17, 2004
Could the eigth day be the "present" the "today" the "moment" that we should all be living in? Mayhaps that is so. A thought-provoking poem, Kate. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed on December 17, 2004
(((kate)))

nirvana, you have found! eureka! what a glorious poem--thank you for sharing it--it is most excellent!

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
Reviewed on December 17, 2004
I think it takes a 'third eye' to see that eigth day, Kate. I enjoyed the revitalizing feeling your piece gives me, pondering that eigth day. I think it is the day of the mind without exterior turbulence... I will be thinking on this equational addition to time until I see an answer that suits me. ... Thank you!

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Reviewed by Linda Roman
Reviewed on December 16, 2004
splendid.....

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on December 16, 2004
Your mystical Eighth Day
Makes sense of the other seven:

Wonderful! And the Ninth Day is even better - but rarely found.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on December 15, 2004
no yestedays! you are a magical poet! I agree with Janet, you are able to resource your duality...

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on December 15, 2004
awesome poem! on the eight day we have come to live in The Now ...

Reviewed by Janet Parker
Reviewed on December 15, 2004
Power in simplicity, Kate. You have a gift for being lucid and complex at the same time. This is a beautiful poem. I'd like to go to Narnia and sleep soundly against the comfort of Aslan.

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on December 15, 2004
This is very interesting and many times I wonder about words of a song. Excellent poem.

Reviewed by George Jackson
Reviewed on December 15, 2004
I loved Narnia...had the series read to me when I was small. I loved the message here. We really only have today, right? Thank you.

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on December 15, 2004
And Suddenly There are No Yesterdays Or Tomorrows,Merely Downward Spiral,Endless,i.e. You Just Described The IMPLODING Of Planet Earth!

Excellent!

TRASK

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on December 15, 2004
Chronicles of Narnia.......into the wardrobe?
Your own land of fantasy!
Lovely! If I am on the right track, I want one too!!!!
So much symbolism here........lots of brain power at work :)
Ty for this one........
I am floating with a smile.....
bravo
pax A


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