...Well, at least by now you know what's coming! Do tell me if you have had enough of these - otherwise there could be another two or three... LOL Kate xx
ARTIST'S MODEL 3
Her cast-off clothes -
timeless perennials of
boyish, faded denim -
lay across his bed
like memories of
a childhood lost
He dressed her instead
with fresh robes of his vision:
the organza of his gaze;
the gossamer thread of his creative thoughts
He painted her regal on silk
and signed his portrait in ink:
"Your Admirer"
Smiling her acceptance
she rolled and sealed it
in the crushed velvet
of her heart
He dressed her instead
with fresh robes of his vision:
A marvelous vision - and poem. Please continue.
PS How was Carnaby Street?!
Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)
Reviewed on January 4, 2005
This is good. I could even see more of it, it makes the reader intrigued, always a good thing to keep us wondering rather than smothering in useless words and you showed that here- great job!
It is amazing what you can write in a few words. I love your references to different materials (cloth) This is beautiful and I could never tire of your poetry.
I echo Anna Marie! This is exquisite Kate! Your metaphor
is vibrant and brings the painting to life!
More, always more please!;-)
Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on January 3, 2005
Kate, my dear, who could EVER get tired of your
beautiful verse?
This one, too, made this artist smile.
Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on January 3, 2005
Oh to be admired like this but then some men paint the portraits with their words.
Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on January 3, 2005
Kate, one could never tire of visiting your remarkable Den or reading your wonderful romantic timeless creations, Poet. The second stanza speaks volumes. Excellent work.
I am truly at a loss to find the right words to describe this work of love. I want and feel like I am a voyuer watching from the shadows as this story unfolds. No, it is not enough, bring on the beauty until it reaches it's own natural conclusion, I will be watching...
Felix
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on January 3, 2005
Lovely write, could read and enjoy more of these Kate.
Ah this is so sweet. The magic in your pen flows effortlessly, creating one gem after another, that is polished and sparkles before my newly awakened eyes.
Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader)
Reviewed on January 3, 2005
sounds like a match to me Kate, crushed velvet against silk, Al
David Hightower’s lyrically expansive meditation on the whims of fate and the unpredictability of the human condition fill the pages of THE HANGING MAN DREAMS with thrilling music and mesmerizing imagery. Hightower’s richly infused voice echoes the e
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with fresh robes of his vision:
A marvelous vision - and poem. Please continue.
PS How was Carnaby Street?!
Short - succinct - resounding - perfection!! Loved this one!!
Best wishes and Happy New Year,
Robert
Is a kinda, gentle dreamy like poem..
is vibrant and brings the painting to life!
More, always more please!;-)
beautiful verse?
This one, too, made this artist smile.
Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)
Felix
Josh
You can't stop now. These are excellent works of art. Never interfere with a genius when she is creating.