Volatile (poem) by Kate Burnside on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on February 11, 2005

Kate...clap clap clap...gem of a write...love n luck....BHUWAN

Reviewed on February 2, 2005

You've captured the essence of womankind, Kate. Whether deifyed or defiled, through the ages we have carried the ember of our species. Excellent write!

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on February 2, 2005

I loved this, beautiful and so well expressed, lovely!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Cynthia Castle

Reviewed on February 1, 2005

Kate,

Sensational creation! I love the imagery and the essence that lingers on! Sensual and mysterious expression as love can be. Thanks for sharing the flames of your talent!

Cynthia

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on February 1, 2005

totally outstanding imagery and metaphor!

Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)

Reviewed on February 1, 2005

This is one of your best, just enough said, a good balance of words and images with good clarity so that the images don't overwhelm, but help visualize. The first verse is perfect.

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on February 1, 2005

Kate,

Great metaphors inundate this eloquent piece ... stunning!!

Best wishes,

Robert

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on February 1, 2005

Oh God! This is so perfect..I love it ..saved it..thankyou!!

vesna :)

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on February 1, 2005

Your thoughts have truly been unleashed in this poem - and they're probably uncrushable, too.

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on February 1, 2005

WTG Kate, you penned after-thoughts of love very well

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on February 1, 2005

Kate you are amazing. I can understand this so well. Traces of love are like those scented candles, some only give off a lot of scent when you do blow them out. This is a great write and it really makes the reader think about love and the after affects of love.

Hugs
Felix

Reviewed by George Jackson

Reviewed on January 31, 2005

I wasn't around three months ago, so this is the first time I've read this. Its beautiful.

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on January 31, 2005

Wild N Off The Wall Hot Romantic!

TRASK

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson

Reviewed on January 31, 2005

think i remember this
sounds fresh and gives great imagery
captivating as well!!!

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on January 31, 2005

A captivating piece. Well done.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on January 31, 2005

Kate,

Magnificent. Haunting. But o, so beautiful! I love the way you write, Poet!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

Reviewed on January 31, 2005

Boy this one gets your attention.

Reviewed by Janet Parker

Reviewed on January 31, 2005

This is spiritual, reckless abandon and mysterious. Magnificant!

Reviewed by Dave Harm

Reviewed on January 31, 2005

This is really good and spiritual. Even when your gone, your presence remains, I like that...

Reviewed by Nila Jamier (Reader)

Reviewed on January 31, 2005

This is so excellent.
"Put me to the flame
and my essence is released:
Loosely curling strands,
the sweetly-perfumed haze
that rises sensuous from
a newly snuffed-out wick. "

No one could forget ya Kate!

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on January 31, 2005

Naa, your just a multi talented poet...

Who has only love in her heart. No guile..

Don't even think of going. The world loves yer..

But yes you do smell.....

And talk, talk talk talk.

Like my favourite flower and my favourite interestiong talk show host.

No one could get fed up with your conversation.

You also are so kind to all in your reviews.

Reviewed by M. B. (Reader)

Reviewed on January 31, 2005

I like the way you compare yourself with intangibles: fragrance, prayer, smoky haze... essences, which as you say at the end, linger on...

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on January 31, 2005

This is sensual perfection Kate. A true JOY to read.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on January 31, 2005

... Guess I must be, Eileen!! Aint life grand?! :))

Reviewed by Paul Williams

Reviewed on January 31, 2005

Ahh an unknown mystery indeed...no mystery in your talent though Kate.

Paul;-}