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Transcendental
by Kate Burnside → (All Poetry by Kate Burnside)
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A rewrite of "Swollen"; originally a creative response to short stories by Virginia Woolf



TRANSCENDENTAL


In a dream-like state,
out of the body,
into the spirit.
On the blue-green edge of reality.

Becoming weightless, I am only aware
of a subsonic pulse: a heartbeat.

I feel your presence, the palm of your hand
on top of my head. It presses me down
into subliminal depths,
your air inflating my lungs.

Your nearness impacts like mouth-to-mouth resuscitation.
Your breath swells a fullness upon my lips.
Your tongue tastes of pollen sweetness.
Your words pulse in my throat.

Swollen, I am bathed with inspiration.
The life of your thoughts flutters within me,
like a first and sudden quickening
of spawned poetic progeny:
Immaculate and mysterious...

* * * *

Bumble bees are not designed to fly;
they rise awkwardly yet somehow
manage to land with grace -
like our words with their short, inadequate
and ephemeral wings:
Poetry in motion.



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 Reviews of "Transcendental"
Reviewed by Michael LaSalle (Reader)
Reviewed on May 30, 2007
Kate, I love this poem on astral projection, I, as well practice
transcendental meditation, rare to read such work, I enjoyed your description, i can see why your
thoughts are brilliant, mike

Reviewed on February 16, 2005
Kate,

Imagery par excellence; riveting poem - exceptional!!


Best wishes,

Robert

Reviewed on February 16, 2005
Well penned emotion Kate

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on February 15, 2005
you are getting really good at blending emotion with images that seduce the soul with moments of intense clarity and poetic insight ...

both poems are really awesome ...

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on February 15, 2005
Mysterious Poetry In Motion!

TRASK

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on February 15, 2005
Reading this has me afloat and I doubt if I'll be back to earth for awhile. This lives up to the title and then some;-)the sensuousness
achieved is stunning. bye Kate before I get carried away;-) awesome!

etw

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on February 15, 2005
Kate as usual your talent shines out like a shooting star and gels the words of your poetry together. Deep yet easily digested like a fine wine ahhhhh so sweet.

Hugs,
Pops

Reviewed on February 15, 2005
Kate,

Where do I begin??? JAYS, the emotion, the imagery, the POWER in your words!

I particularly love,

"...your nearness impacts like mouth to mouth recuscitation
your breath swells a fullness upon my lips
your tongue tasts of pollen sweetness
your words pulse in my throat.

swollen, i am bathed with inspiration
the life of your thoughts flutters within me...."

DOES IT EVER. WOW!!!!! *STANDING O*

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed on February 15, 2005

Impressive imagery depicts emotions through "Transcendental" showing the visions of a mature soul on the delivery of its mellifluous message.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on February 15, 2005
A most captivating poem in motion, Kate.

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on February 15, 2005
Well I say that about the Bee and this is another example of your fine work.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on February 15, 2005
LOL I'm listening to immaculate Mary, as I read this.

Stylish beaut of a poem.
As for the bee, it proves experts know more about less, and know everything about nothing.

Both gentle gems..

Reviewed by George Jackson
Reviewed on February 15, 2005
Beautiful write, Kate. Did you see that move "The Hours?".


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