In the bible it was said that Samson's stregth was in his hair. If your creativity is in yours, anyone would be proud to wear a lock close to their heart. Your words are held close to the hearts of many. Lovely analogy Kate.
Chanti
Reviewed by M. B. (Reader)
Reviewed on April 5, 2005
Kate what a stunning new way to see! That's just it, your poetry opens spiritual eyes.
the symbolic metaphor of this poem definitely has style to it ... no doubt, a lock would be an endearing reminder of that wonderful mind on that creative head of yours ;)
I love this Kate! Great write. My hair was long and braided down my back until the age of seven, when my mother saw fit to cut my hair and give me a perm-as was the fashion. I was mortified and moarned my braids. Annie Oakley was my heroine and she had braids. Pippi Longstocking had braids. Madelaine had braids. The Lady locked in the tower had one long flowing braid. During my flower child days, it grew below my buttocks and as you write here-it was my flag flying free!
Our hair says so much about who we are and how we are feeling. We can dress it up, dress it down, comb it coy, curl it hot and sexy, color it playful or sultry. Our hair is something we can so easily change to reflect our mood, or perhaps change our mood. Our poetry seems to be able to follow all those same rules and possibilities..both reflections of our spirit and projections of how we wish to be viewed. Excellent writing, Kate.
Take care,
Sherry
This is soooooo lovely Kate, I think one of your very best to date. I would be honored as George said to have a lock too. Great choice of topic and comparison,
So uplifting Kate. It's like a dream come true story.
A cinderella poem, beautifully written! A womans hair
means so much to us, it has mysterious qualities;-).
This was incredibly lovely, such a beautiful and inspirational poem, loved this,
Reindeer
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on March 29, 2005
The Autumn of your life...
Every blighter ruffled my hair. Saying it's baby soft..
Yup love the free flying meself..
Like how you write from youngster, to your autumnial years..
Nice metaphor..
Early Works is an exhaustive compilation of the first decade of the poems and stories of Z.B.McClure. Included are family photos, rare personal photos, photos of 1st draft manuscripts of many of his early poems. Also some biography and memoir materia
Chanti
~ Mari
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Take care,
Sherry
Felix
No problem--your poetry is something I look forward to reading every day. It's close to my heart, so no worries!
Beautiful metaphor--LOVE this write.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
A cinderella poem, beautifully written! A womans hair
means so much to us, it has mysterious qualities;-).
Love,
Eileen
Reindeer
Every blighter ruffled my hair. Saying it's baby soft..
Yup love the free flying meself..
Like how you write from youngster, to your autumnial years..
Nice metaphor..
good stuff kate :)
and so so true
Those curious locks so aptly twin'd,
Whose every hair a soul doth bind.
~Thomas Carew