It all about perception
you have done well at descibing the contrasts
sort of like a black and white photo and when one crosses into the other you are left with a gray area
So true my sweet Kate we all have different dreams but are given the same heart to love with, the same soul to become spititual with and the same body to age with, but lets not forget the beauty around us as you suggest. very sweet write here my dear friend.
Pops
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on June 5, 2005
Can I be a pebble on the beach, sand gets in my toes. Can I huh huh huh? We see tomorrow in 60 mins, the yankies in 5-8 hrs. Therefore we can tell them about tomorrow today! Einstien eat yer heart out..
nomatter how rich one is, we all have 60 mins, to spend each hour, and it's up to one how one spends them.
Your philosophical write points towards the light at the end of the tunnel which we all strive to reach and break out of the darkness that held us captive. But to reach this light one has to keep moving and not stand still and be mired in the darkness of inactivity. You have exercised the grey matter with this splendid write.
We have to be open to it's light don't we? The "stranglehold of darkness" will overtake us if allowed. Our minds create our world. Certainly a beaut, Kate!
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So true--beautiful write! I especially like the first stanza. :)
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
great write, Kate ...
Good write.
Love, Bonnie
from one grain of sand to another,pearl on!;-)
Brilliant poem!
Alrisha
you have done well at descibing the contrasts
sort of like a black and white photo and when one crosses into the other you are left with a gray area
Happy gazing
HH
Pops
nomatter how rich one is, we all have 60 mins, to spend each hour, and it's up to one how one spends them.
PS Nice poem.
Ron