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Trading Places
by Kate Burnside → (All Poetry by Kate Burnside)
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... A quickie! :)) Thanks for a great day, AT: enjoyed your seascapes at the National! Our Office Christmas Party will be next! K xx


TRADING PLACES


Blue skies painted on walls
of carriages on intercity trains.

Clouds indoors and I am outside,
my face imposed on landscapes flashing past.

My reflection a voyeur,
surveying the internal scene with interest...

It thinks it knows, but the image lies:
it cannot see when a body and soul
have traded places. 

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Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on June 19, 2005
This elicits thoughtful reflection, Kate. Thank you. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on June 17, 2005
perhaps when body and soul have traded places the truth about our selves manifests ...

profoundly metaphysical ...

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on June 17, 2005
wow
and wowza
wish i wrote this one!
you are deep!!!
is it the wine?
just kiddng...........this is a keeper kate!


Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on June 17, 2005
My reflection a voyeur,
surveying the internal scene with interest...

Most interesting, Kate. And glad to hear you and AT had a good time.
(Send Pictures.)

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on June 17, 2005
Good ain't I, that poor lady in the pic..

Blimey you write this on the crowded train.

This is very picasso, pickasso, perkasso, erm Constable..

Reviewed by L. Figgins
Reviewed on June 16, 2005
"...We decide what is real and what is illusion." Soul travel sublime, Kate. Enjoyed!

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on June 16, 2005
A clever piece to move the grey matter inside and out.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 16, 2005
More than a voyeur a shape-shifter;-) You always keep our minds busy Kate, and do it so well!Excellent !

Eileen

Reviewed by Janet Parker
Reviewed on June 16, 2005
Very interesting, Kate. "when a body and soul have traded places". What an original idea that only you could create. Those lines could drive me nuts if I kept saying them over and over:>) Kind of like "Who made God?" Excellent, Dear Kate. xxxooo Janet

Reviewed on June 16, 2005
always a visual and intellectual treat when we read your words, kate; very well done! brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in america, karen lynn in texas. :D

Reviewed on June 16, 2005
Kate,

An excellent, richly imaged, beautifully crafted write--well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on June 16, 2005
trapped inside when wanting to be out or trapped out when wanting to be in...hmnnn sweet Kate I don't think I'd mind either with a good aussie white wine and the company of you to read these lazy afternoon poems to me.

Felix

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on June 16, 2005
Very creative!


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