Loving Mirage (poem) by Kate Burnside on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on July 29, 2005

Visuals that capture your love.
Excellent!

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on July 29, 2005

"a pas de deux Flamenco;"

Ah, yes, 'tis the voice of a woman familiarizing herself with the marvelous act of shedding stress. Your poetic generosity reached out and brought me ease, too. That quote up there, like the entire piece, pleasured my need for imagination. If words are like grains of sand, you, dear heart, are an entire coastline! Lovely... katy xox

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on July 29, 2005

Wonderful imagery, beautiful poem, and I love that vacation pic, Kate.

Reviewed by Sandra Mushi

Reviewed on July 29, 2005

Another exceptionally beautiful write, Kate! Well penned! I especially love the last stanza ... ...

" ... My heart, fragile as glass,
responds to their chimes,
skips a beat as unseen hands
lay diamond dust threaded
soft about my neck:

like garlanding a beloved. "

God bless,

Sandie.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on July 28, 2005

brilliant light indeed!

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on July 28, 2005

My heart, fragile as glass,
responds to their chimes,
skips a beat as unseen hands
lay diamond dust threaded
soft about my neck:

like garlanding a beloved.

Kate....another brilliant write from you...your style is great...its unique but very very beautiful....your poems are getting stronger and stronger....fantastic verses yet again from the most powerful pen...love n luck....BHUWAN!!!!!

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on July 28, 2005

Reminds me of the fairy tale about the girl who every year was given a drop of rain on a neckless for her first 10 yrs of life, as he was her god father, each drop had magical powers.

I too sadly know another meaning.lol

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on July 28, 2005

The salt air is working wonders for your poetic gifts Kate !
You convey a lot in precise and succinct terms
"My heart, fragile as glass,
responds to their chimes, "
Peter

Reviewed by Paul Williams

Reviewed on July 28, 2005

hehe I know another meaning too, perhaps I need to get out more hehehe...excellent capture this Kate.

Paul;-)

Reviewed by Leysa Lowery

Reviewed on July 28, 2005

Beautiful! I enjoyed this very much!

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on July 28, 2005

superb writng and imagery, kate; very nice! well done! brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in america, karen lynn in texas. :D

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on July 28, 2005

Kate,

This is exceptionally beautiful, image and verse; stunningly penned once again, you take me where you were...are. LOL Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on July 28, 2005

Wow-Kate...........! fiery solar beads- deep meya' Lady- AWEsome and enjoyed that like licking ice cream slowly... chocol. This is sweeeeeeeeet. Imagery is powerful-WArmly,Sheee Thank you 4 it...

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on July 28, 2005

Me neither but the poem is still a delightful read

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on July 28, 2005

Chuffed to find that an alternative meaning of "garland" is a selection of prose or poetry! Well, I never knew that... :)) K xx