Another Spanish write, but I thought you could maybe do with a break from the monotony of endless blue skies and vast, windswept beaches - yes?! :)) K xx
PRESS RESET
When loose, soft tendrils of hair,
fallen from a pinned coil,
grace the nape
of a woman’s bowed head
and inspire tenderness;
when the red, chafed spot
on a man’s shaved neck
incites passion;
when the sun-bleached hairs
on a child’s bronzed,
washboard stomach
stir a giggling feel-good;
that’s when I know
our default nature
is set for love,
I really like this one and after spendin the morning kissing, hugging and tickling my grandaughter I couldn't agree with you more. Wonderful write sweet Kate.
Felix
Spot on dearest Kate, Spot on! This is just fantastic it has a sprituality all of it's own...seems them hols have done you good ;)hehe...hugs
Paul;-)
Reviewed by Pacific Ink (Reader)
Reviewed on July 30, 2005
A fabulous work, Kate. Only nit that I may have is ragarding line breaks (as if leaving a footnote at the end of each strophe), but then other side of the coin will say "excellent use of shock therapy"...You are scaling new heights with every write!
Pacific Ink
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on July 30, 2005
You are absolutely right Kate ...
we were created by Love for Love.
That is our purpose here, to care for all God's Creation.
only the imagery supercedes the inner spirit of this poem ... it captures the mood and texture of man's innate charm and nature and clarifies his true form ...
This write is nothing short of amazing, Kate. Your images so vivid that I could reach out and gently brush that sun bleached hair on that rock-hard six-pack stomach...oh um excuse me, I was drifting there... You did a wonderful job on this, it is the duality of we humans that is so unsettling. When we realize how deeply we love and how powerfully we war, it seems an enigma.
Take care,
Sherry
Wow-your imagery is EXCEllent Kate! Beautiful S O F T Poem- Thank YOu 4 it, your choice of words are AmaZzzzing, Spain sure rocked something loose in ya'- Lucky You~! :) WArmly,Sheeeox
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on July 29, 2005
that’s when I know
our default nature
is set for love,
and frail flesh not built for war.
If we could live by practising such priciples.
Instead of all the recent trauma and pain.
Plumb Kate, plumb...
It's amazing to me how this "Spanish" experience has done so much for you and how it is doing so much for us, your readers, Kate. It's a learning experience. Ironically or coincidentally, my ex and one of my daughters are in Spain right now and, as you did, obviously enjoying the experience. Thank you once again for sharing. Love and peace to you. Regis
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Enter the pages of diaspora in quiet introspection. Bathe your thoughts with subtle humor; synchronize your spirit-sense with history-in-heat; fall headlong with eyes wide open into
Felix
Paul;-)
Pacific Ink
we were created by Love for Love.
That is our purpose here, to care for all God's Creation.
Love & Light,
Joseph
God bless, Kate!
Sandie.
Peter
eileen
Take care,
Sherry
our default nature
is set for love,
and frail flesh not built for war.
If we could live by practising such priciples.
Instead of all the recent trauma and pain.
Plumb Kate, plumb...
well done, Kate
Excellent, provocative, sage words. :) Dynamically written and illustrated by the master imager, herself!
Now, who's tired of windswept beaches and endless blue skies? NOT ME!!!!!!!!!!! Bring 'em on! LOL
((((HUGS)))) and love, Karla. :)