Damn! I am so out of time... had meant to review before I shoot off, but need to get some sleep instead (sorry, but needs must!) I have here revised a "pair" of writes: Rosemary, the herb, is symbolic of remembrance and, while on the "cooking" theme, thought I'd throw in a bit of flambe, too! :)) Two for one... and, to humour me while I'm incapacitated, you could even let me know which you prefer, if you like; 'twould be interestin! BE WELL, PEOPLE, and lots and lots of love while I'm gone. Be good! :)) ... missin you already.... xxx K xxxx
ROSE MARY
I am incense:
my life is fragrance
and a prayer.
Put me to the flame
and my essence is released:
loosely curling strands,
the sweetly-perfumed haze
that rises sensuous from
a newly snuffed-out wick.
I am the scent of molten wax;
touch me now and I shall become
as that liquid second skin
that wraps you round.
Burn me, then,
and I am unleashed;
crush me, and I am spent…
but my presence remains,
an unknown mystery
that kindles a remembrance
even after I am gone.
* * * * * * * *
ENFLAMEE
Because a candle burns,
I am not in the dark, alone;
You are with me, but you are not
the molten wax that singes now my finger
with its burning liquid skin.
And you are not the cool head
of the lily-petalled flame,
or the pink of its hot heart.
As I breathe out my longing
the candle flame is snuffed;
close at last, you are
the scent of smokey strands
that permeate my darkness,
Dear sister angel....I simply love your poems...guess why...you are the best poet around....the above poems showed how a classic writer you are....excellent....BHUWAN!!!
I would not propose a preference between ROSE MARY and ENFLAMEE but appreciate both as twin beauties, speaking with their individual intentions to the essence of treasured souls and moments. Let us call it a double blessing that this reader is grateful to receive and that he prays will prove a double blessing to you as well in your time of convalescence.
Wow! What a bargin Kate. Two superb pieces of poetry for one, hard to choose so I wont, lol, needless to say anything that comes from your pen is worth every last syllable.
Wishing you Godspeed for your recovery and healing! Your faith is strong and as always it is a steady presence in your work! Both poems are wonderful! Archangel Raphael is the angel of Healing, may his presence be with you and his Emerald Waters wash over you!
Thanks for sharing...hope you are okay..I know the surgery is done...and you must be asleep now.....but smile when you read this....had problems with my mail...our server is out...and grrrrrrrrrr I am flooded with mail using another inbox option via intekom!!
Choose just one? No can do, Kate, though I remember the first one well and love it even more this go round. Rest well and be of great courage, as I know you will. Dawn
Kate you are so brilliant your light will surround the operating room and join that of Creator's to guide and guard the surgeons and all their assistants so that you will awake hardly knowing there has been anything done! You are in the hands of the one you love and trust. He loves you and will see you through this in the way that is best for you! My thoughts and prayers are with you. These two poems are so creative and beautiful it's hard to choose, but I have to go with Rosemary, I love it;-)
Love,
Eileen
I will be here savoring both of these beauties until you return, Kate. May God be holding your hand and angels be singing softly until you awaken from your surgery. I will be keeping you in my thoughts and prayers. Be safe, strong and well, my friend. I pray your recovery will be swift and complete.
Love,
Sherry
Wow sweet Kate these two are both so serene and passionate it is difficult to choose actually impossible to chose one over the other so I will love them both.I will be waiting with fingers crossed for your return hugs and kisses.
Pops
Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)
Reviewed on October 16, 2005
Wow, these are inspiring, very well-written, and i love the sensual quality of them. I tried to decide which I liked better but it is too hard- be well:) Michelle
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but my presence remains,
an unknown mystery
that kindles a remembrance
even after I am gone.
don't know how I missed your work before today, but I won't anymore.
peace and love, Carole
Paul;-)
Hugs,
Tami
Wishing you Godspeed for your recovery and healing! Your faith is strong and as always it is a steady presence in your work! Both poems are wonderful! Archangel Raphael is the angel of Healing, may his presence be with you and his Emerald Waters wash over you!
(((((gentle hugs))))) and MANY prayers--be well!
I love both, but the first one REALLY moved me...it permeates my soul, your wonderful incense and words. :)
Love, Karla.
I miss you, too...*tears*
Mail you when I can!!
Love Tinka
I think you have written two fine, dreamy, mystical poems here Kate.
Ian
Regis
I am not in the dark, alone;
Many candles are burning now, and many thoughts and prayers are with our beloved Kate. And we miss you already, too!
Enjoyed...
They both radiate strong faith..
Aww you gotta keep hold of that feather..
Now when out walking if I see one. I smile...
i will miss you ... look for that feather ;)
I'm waiting for you to come back to us
love
Huda
Love,
Eileen
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Love,
Sherry
You have given us light
and we are custodians
for that part of you
until you return safely
Pops