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Riding Bareback On The Wind
by Kate Burnside → (All Poetry by Kate Burnside)
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Many thanks to Sherry for making this suggestion...

"World is suddener than we fancy it.
World is crazier and more of it than
we think,"
Louis MacNeice, "Snow"


RIDING BAREBACK ON THE WIND


Present but not here, I inhabit that place
that’s straight on til morning,
dwell in a time that rides bareback
on the wind.

Like the lift in Marilyn’s infamous white dress
or deep plunge of Superman’s daredevil dive,
the life of the unseen, the unknown
ricochets round walls that are ringing with laughter;
spirals giddy down the helix of world’s DNA;
beholds unamazed the wide grin of my God
posed winking and gleaming for the cameras of stars.

Swallowed up in the deep throat,
the manifest of His appearing,
I’m a dancer raised high
on invisible hands; elevated
to heights by insuperable energy.

Rising and falling, I am - all at once -
back then as here now, constant but changing;
I’m the life of the sea
riding bareback on the wind.


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 Reviews of "Riding Bareback On The Wind"
Reviewed by Monette Bebow-Reinhard (Reader)
Reviewed on January 2, 2006
What a wonderful description of a feeling - but the feeling itself is to be envied. Can you bottle it and sell it, please? Thanks for sharing this.
Monette

Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on December 31, 2005
Now this is a masterpiece I love the aura you developed in this poem and the alliteration gives it a classical and free flowing have it your way feeling I loved reading the poem from the beginning to end. Wonderful piece. Happy New Years to you we must always live for the present and allow the future to unfold. Thank you for your comments they mean so very much to me. :)

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on December 20, 2005
Loved the uplifting feeling of this write and just great descriptions!

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on December 19, 2005
Hi, Kate. I missed this yesterday. WOW! I love it, especially the lines about Marilyn and Superman, plus inferences of sound and speed. Kind of makes me think of Harry Potter zooming on his broom. (I just took a quiz that says I'm a kid at heart.) You've really captured the umph! of spirit suggested by the title. Put a big grin on my face. ~~Nordette

Reviewed on December 19, 2005
Wonderfl write, Kate; very nice!

Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you and yours!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :)

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on December 18, 2005
Nice one Wendy.. Catholics only ride bare back too!
Riders on the storm.. Go you girl, giddy up, ride em wide, just don't get a raw hide!!!

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on December 18, 2005
This is superb and I love every line in it but the main line snags in the head and heart like a tumble weed caught in barbed wire...so strong but with no real bonds. A beautiful write from my beautiful English Lady.
Hugs,
Pops

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on December 18, 2005
I swivelled between Lady Godiva and The Lord of the Dance in this exhilirating and positive composition Kate
You have a brilliant interchanging and juxtapositioning of words here Kate
It pays off big time in this classic work
Love
Peter

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on December 18, 2005
"I’m the life of the sea
riding bareback on the wind."

I find this poem most uplifting, Kate. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace.

Regis

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on December 18, 2005
Are you bareback or is the wind...? If its you, watch those stinging insects, they play havoc when they hit you at speed...;) Ed

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on December 18, 2005
Damn you are good...thanks for this great offering!!

You Rock Sis!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on December 18, 2005
As good as it gets! My favorite of yours, and Kudo's to your supreme talent Lady Kate;-)!

Eileen

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
Reviewed on December 18, 2005
"Riding Bareback On The Wind" has it all: Incredible energy, vitality, alliteration and imagery; it left me breathless. Superb composition.

Carmen

Reviewed by Aberjhani
Reviewed on December 18, 2005
Awesome concept, extraordinary execution, and divinely passionate in its energetic flight of imagery and passion. One almost feels intoxicated spinning through the whirl of these lines.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on December 18, 2005
superb metaphor an imagery ... i luv the vitality and motion you have eloquently illustrated ... "I’m the life of the sea
riding bareback on the wind" has a wonderful flow and ambiance ... one of you best poems!

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on December 18, 2005
found your second stanza particularly captivating with such precise imagery and nice touch of alliteration... and then your final lines - wow! Dawn

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on December 18, 2005
This is outstanding Kate ... a true masterpiece! Your spirit is on fire. This is one of my favourites of yours ... absolutely love it. Truly inspiring.

Love & Light,
Joseph

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on December 18, 2005
I’m the life of the sea
riding bareback on the wind.

And may your epic ride continue to be a glorious one, Kate!

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on December 18, 2005
Oh my, Kate, this is magnificent!! I had no idea where you might take that title, but you have surpassed anything I could have imagined in this insightful and uplifting offering. For some reason, to me, the line "Riding Bareback On The Wind" just seemed to blend with your amazing strength and sense of belonging to all that surrounds you. Thank you for this write, it is breathtaking and so liberating to the soul. Excellence beyond the excellent, that is how I would describe your writings, Kate. I am in awe of your talents.

Take care,

Sherry

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on December 18, 2005
Superb write with great imagery to transport one to your world. May the wind always be at your back and the blush of the sun warm your face.


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