Nothing on Earth renders more happiness than a bird's song. Birds are motivated by a flighty desire to grow, and they always treat themselves well with a song. They have no room for self-pity or self-rejection. Ask them, "Do you like yourself?" and you will get a resounding and a balancing act on the telephone wire. Birds have it all together and they live all of their life in the present moment. If I were a robin, I would sing you a song Kate, probably the Beatles' Revolution or Elton John's Crocodile Rock..."well I never new me a Valentine and I guess I never will!!" Elton Rocks, just married his man!
This is so lovely and uplifting. It is true that if we let the light in, the darkness in us will die. I am thankful for the sunshine here in my corner of the world.
Kate you are so very right in that we are so very blessed to hear the song and have it sing with in us! God Bless and have a wonderful and blessed New Year!
What a LOVELY way to start the day!
And, what a wonderful way
to enter a promising new year.
Thank you. - Bill
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on December 30, 2005
Bird beattitudes. So crisply done with great clarity. Every morn I see and hear either Robins or blue tits singing from my eves..
I thought the crafty blighter was talking about me.lol
just like everybody who has already read this and everyone who will, I'm scooping up your "Robin's Song" and claiming it as my new year's promise, Kate. have been in a bit of a dark, brooding mood but found myself today staring out at some cardinals frolicking in my yard. what I love most about this poem is its tenderness, the assertion that one is blessed "to start to feel" and "when you allow..." -- that feeling that the first step matters most and it is in the opening of ourselves and not entirely in the achievement of final effect that the blessing comes. THANK YOU!! and a big transAtlantic hug to you. Happy, happy, happy! Love, Dawn
Blessed I feel to have read this poem. We take so much for granted. Your final couplet really ties it up nicely. Life does sing through us. Thank you for this beauty!
I totally agree with George and Sherry below
We are here to enpower others to reach their full potential and greatness in the eyes of God, and also to savor and enjoy to the limit, the sheer wonders and miracle of life
This has a distinct and beautiful Beatitudes feel about it Kate
I love it !
It is definitely a keeper for the archives !
Love
Peter
This is such an empowering write, Kate. This life is ours and we are blessed to have been granted it. We walk our own pathway and along the way we encounter others whom we will hopefully enlighten with our perspectives on being alive. We are not here to muddle through the mire and believe that is living, we are here to soar and to become one with the universe and inhale the robins song that is being sung for us. We own as much of life as we are willing to reach out and grab onto. I love this poem, Kate. You echo my soul in your verses.
Take care,
Sherry
This is a book of free verse poetry that addresses the seven main tests in life and offers some sensible solutions to passing those tests with minimal discomfort.
This is a book of free verse poetry that addresses the seven main tests in life and offers some sensible solutions to passing those tests with minimal discomfort.
Robin Ouzman Hislop's poetry is certainly in dialogue with some of the key architects of the 'poetics of indeterminacy' – both the Modernist strands represented by the likes of Beckett and Stein, and the postmodernist strands represented, initially,
Regis
May the new year find health, happiness and love!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Happy New Year!
Sage
Happy New Year my friend!!
Love Tinka
of beauty.
Hugs
Tina
D
And, what a wonderful way
to enter a promising new year.
Thank you. - Bill
I thought the crafty blighter was talking about me.lol
and also teaches. Beautifully done!
Healthy Happy New Year to you and yours!
Eileen
Carmen :-)
We are here to enpower others to reach their full potential and greatness in the eyes of God, and also to savor and enjoy to the limit, the sheer wonders and miracle of life
This has a distinct and beautiful Beatitudes feel about it Kate
I love it !
It is definitely a keeper for the archives !
Love
Peter
Take care,
Sherry