... Couldn't resist Sage's comments about the 1,000 petalled Lotus, shakti and the woman falling asleep on the Victorian sofa... hence this bit of deliberate archaism... K xx
FRUIT OF THE LOTUS
She was thinking of Kipling when they set out, nose to tail, descending again to the Plains from the Hill Station at Simla.
She was replete from stimulating discourse, rich feasting and fine wines and the intensity of sun – yet high in the sky – penetrated the flimsy linen of her parasol and burned her porcelain neck, making her head spin; the swaying of the howdah rocked her almost to a hypnotised sleep.
She was still amid the sights and sounds of High Places: the easy laughter, the fruity opulence of well-tuned, confident voices; the scents of privilege mixed with the spicy sweat of those who waited at table. The comfort of a relaxed, induced confusion where sensibility overpowers the mind.
They still had miles to go and she was thirsty, in need of water, a cooling oasis to restore her equilibrium. She considered the intrigue that would fill the pages of the Civil and Military Gazette on their return to Lahore; the salaciousness, the mind-games and gossip that would fuel dinner parties for the next few months of uneasy, overheated residence in the City – all born out of a month’s sojourn of polite society’s stay in a hothouse of the Hills.
She felt herself slipping consciousness. She fingered the locket around her neck, given to her by one who said he was “good jujube”, benevolent fortune, whose contrived nearness to her at dinner tables made her breathless, and whose presence caused her to forget noblesse oblige and bathe blissfully in balmy waters of indolence. On the steeply descending path, she felt the bull beneath her going down, sinking heavily with each footfall into, she imagined, an icy pool, throwing back his trunk and spraying her with refreshment and with lilies that revived her strength, like Ulysses. These thoughts raised a pillar within her, restoring her mind.
She dreamed she heard again that smiling whisper delicate behind her ear that said: “In Chinese, the phrase ‘to ride an elephant’ sounds the same as their word for happiness”. Suddenly now fully awake, her body and spirit were in a state of perfect harmony.
As always you blend the mystic with reality and it's comes our as a magical elixer that warms the body, brightens the soul and wakes up the heart. Well done again sweet Kate.
Infrangible lines, Kate! Goodness! Fifth paragraph is wildly explicit, coming with metaphors that makes my "woman in a boat" dance! Each Goddess champions her own hero! BTW...The Dream was painted by Henri Rousseau in 1910 just before he died and he explained this work was that the woman on the Victorian sofa had fallen asleep and dreamed she had been transported to an ancient natural eutopia. You captured this perfect, Kate. Fruit Of The Lotus is brilliantly ripe for an anthology!
I agree with George below...once again you have surpassed yourself Kate !
Every single word and emotion held my complete attention, you work is going through an expansive and experimental phase !
Love
Peter
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As deafness, illness, and demonic forces close in around him, Ludwig van Beethoven must summon his faith and genius to complete the Missa Solemnis—a sacred masterpiece he believes could bring divine light into a darkening world.
could make a short story and I know you have the
talent to write anything you desire. Hugs Dale
Carmen :-)
Joselyn
Does Kippling still make exceedingly good Kakes Kate?
Paul;-)
Wow!! Well done M'Lady!!
Love Tinka
Hugs,
Pops
Sage
Every single word and emotion held my complete attention, you work is going through an expansive and experimental phase !
Love
Peter