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Fruit Of The Lotus
by Kate Burnside → (All Poetry by Kate Burnside)
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... Couldn't resist Sage's comments about the 1,000 petalled Lotus, shakti and the woman falling asleep on the Victorian sofa... hence this bit of deliberate archaism... K xx


FRUIT OF THE LOTUS


She was thinking of Kipling when they set out, nose to tail, descending again to the Plains from the Hill Station at Simla.

She was replete from stimulating discourse, rich feasting and fine wines and the intensity of sun – yet high in the sky – penetrated the flimsy linen of her parasol and burned her porcelain neck, making her head spin; the swaying of the howdah rocked her almost to a hypnotised sleep.

She was still amid the sights and sounds of High Places: the easy laughter, the fruity opulence of well-tuned, confident voices; the scents of privilege mixed with the spicy sweat of those who waited at table. The comfort of a relaxed, induced confusion where sensibility overpowers the mind.

They still had miles to go and she was thirsty, in need of water, a cooling oasis to restore her equilibrium. She considered the intrigue that would fill the pages of the Civil and Military Gazette on their return to Lahore; the salaciousness, the mind-games and gossip that would fuel dinner parties for the next few months of uneasy, overheated residence in the City – all born out of a month’s sojourn of polite society’s stay in a hothouse of the Hills.

She felt herself slipping consciousness. She fingered the locket around her neck, given to her by one who said he was “good jujube”, benevolent fortune, whose contrived nearness to her at dinner tables made her breathless, and whose presence caused her to forget noblesse oblige and bathe blissfully in balmy waters of indolence. On the steeply descending path, she felt the bull beneath her going down, sinking heavily with each footfall into, she imagined, an icy pool, throwing back his trunk and spraying her with refreshment and with lilies that revived her strength, like Ulysses. These thoughts raised a pillar within her, restoring her mind.

She dreamed she heard again that smiling whisper delicate behind her ear that said: “In Chinese, the phrase ‘to ride an elephant’ sounds the same as their word for happiness”. Suddenly now fully awake, her body and spirit were in a state of perfect harmony.


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 Reviews of "Fruit Of The Lotus"
Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on January 3, 2006
You do write so well Kate. This most definately
could make a short story and I know you have the
talent to write anything you desire. Hugs Dale

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on January 3, 2006
I agree with Carmen, Kate - felt like I was there, and this would truly make a great short story, or perhaps, even the beginning of an epic novel.

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
Reviewed on January 3, 2006
You took me into this journey and made me savor every word and every image created.

Carmen :-)

Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on January 3, 2006
This is so well written I love it like taking a journey and becoming part of this piece. TY Kate Hope your New Year Is blessed and fruitful too.

Joselyn

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on January 3, 2006
Intelligent rhetorical piece. With unique thoughts of an ecphrasis..
Does Kippling still make exceedingly good Kakes Kate?

Reviewed by Paul Williams
Reviewed on January 3, 2006
Outstanding dear Kate, you just get better and better with each creation...superb. Happy New Year.

Paul;-)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on January 3, 2006
And she DID inspire you Well PêL!!

Wow!! Well done M'Lady!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on January 3, 2006
As always you blend the mystic with reality and it's comes our as a magical elixer that warms the body, brightens the soul and wakes up the heart. Well done again sweet Kate.

Hugs,
Pops

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on January 2, 2006
Infrangible lines, Kate! Goodness! Fifth paragraph is wildly explicit, coming with metaphors that makes my "woman in a boat" dance! Each Goddess champions her own hero! BTW...The Dream was painted by Henri Rousseau in 1910 just before he died and he explained this work was that the woman on the Victorian sofa had fallen asleep and dreamed she had been transported to an ancient natural eutopia. You captured this perfect, Kate. Fruit Of The Lotus is brilliantly ripe for an anthology!

Sage

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on January 2, 2006
exceptional write, Kate! you continue to amaze me ...

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on January 2, 2006
I agree with George below...once again you have surpassed yourself Kate !
Every single word and emotion held my complete attention, you work is going through an expansive and experimental phase !
Love
Peter

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
Reviewed on January 2, 2006
I agree with George...marvelous!

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on January 2, 2006
T.S. Eliot never wrote any better. Marvelous write.


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