Lost In Translation (poem) by Kate Burnside on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on April 4, 2006

Do angels hear us on a different frequency? I imagine they have abilities that we do not possess. They do have so many more responsibilities than us mortals. Can a sigh speak volumes.....I think yes, when caught by the right ear..........
This is a dreamy heavenly wrie Kate, it flows like a blanket of peace, and I hope with all my heart, that you are feeling peaceful now....my condolences to you and yours..........
Love your new profile pic...........
Its wonderful
all the best...........pax Anita :)

Reviewed by Debashish Haar

Reviewed on March 8, 2006

This is a wonderful poem, Kate. You have created a mood, and allowed the images to evolve and devolve magically.

D

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Reviewed on March 7, 2006

I left those two swan feathers under your pillows for this very reason. Away with all of your fears, sweet Kate. Blessed Be.

Sage

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Reviewed on March 7, 2006

Could that feather, perhaps, be that of an Angel? I like the rhythm and rhyme of this one Kate.

Blessings of Love & Light,
Joseph

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on March 4, 2006

Such a beautiful gift that you have offered, Kate. Thank you. Best wishes to you. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Aberjhani

Reviewed on March 3, 2006

LOST IN TRANSLATION but found in excellence. These lines fall over the reader like a silk net of hushed urgencies and luminous threads. Love the feel and the sound and the sense they make.
Aberjhani

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on March 3, 2006

Awstricken by this pen. Your quality keeps rising. Great work

Reviewed by Sandy Knauer

Reviewed on March 1, 2006

Very nice, Kate. I wonder if everyone built up to a soft sigh with this line: Sweet breath of a sigh
that comforts the night
If you didn't carefully plan that, your natural talent is amazing. If you did carefully plan that, I'm envious. Beautiful job.

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on March 1, 2006

Nothing lost in the translation here, Kate, this is outstanding!. I hope you have a wonderfully sunny and refreshingly restful vacation. Catch ya on the flip-flop..wish I was going along...Have a safe trip, we'll miss you 'till you return.
Sherry

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on March 1, 2006

beautiful ambiance, Kate ... have a smooth and inspired trip ;)

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on March 1, 2006

Kate,

I enjoy all that you do; I understand clearly of the things you choose to write about! I hope you have fun on your vacation; I wish I were going! I need to get away!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D

Have fun and stay safe!

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on March 1, 2006

Kate,

Your poetry is never lost in translation; it soars! Have a great vacation, have fun, get some much needed rest...and know you're in a lot of people's thoughts. Will miss you while your gone...wish I were going with you!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on March 1, 2006

Sweet write from a sweet lady, enjoy your trip but hurry back I will miss ya.

Felix

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on March 1, 2006

hey feather girl. have some fun while you're gone. nothing lost in translation on this sending-off poem, Dawn

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on March 1, 2006

Beautiful Kate...just beautiful!!

I will be good I promise.......................I hope..lol!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on March 1, 2006

This is so comforting and reassuring in its efficaciousness Kate
Embroidered with beautiful aliteration and meter, this couplet gets to the heart of the matter
Enjoy your break, and come back re-energised and enthuisiastic
Peter

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on March 1, 2006

Lovely poem, not to worry your feather speaks volumes;-)
gozar del mar

eT

Reviewed by Janet Parker

Reviewed on March 1, 2006

Your muse knows what it's doing, Kate ;>) This is so light and beautiful. xxxooo Janet

Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher

Reviewed on March 1, 2006

It is beautiful!
Birgit and Roger

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on March 1, 2006

Whatever you write is always marvelous to me.