Unveiled (poem) by Kate Burnside on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher

Reviewed on March 26, 2006

Beautiful and romantic, a joy to read!
Birgit and Roger

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on March 26, 2006

Beautiful Kate!!

Keep the spirit Uppie Sis!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on March 25, 2006

Oh sweet Kate good to see you posted and with such a beautiful and strong romantic poem. Well done.

Felix

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on March 25, 2006

This is great, Kate! I haven't been able to write much, and I've certainly not been able to do rhyming metered for a very long time. I used to think if it didn't rhyme with rhythm, it wasn't a poem. But as I aged, I discovered the many ways of expressing. But I still like the metered rhymed the best. You do it well..... thank you for sharing....

In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on March 25, 2006

a beautiful poem affirming your faith in lasting love ... you are blessed, Kate ...

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on March 25, 2006

Kate
When we " lose " ourselves in our work and labours, then we can march forward with confidence, knowing that's the very thing that our Loved Ones would prompt us to do !
Remember Jesus said " No one who looks back, after putting their hand to the plough, is fit to follow me ! "
Love and Blessings
Peter

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on March 25, 2006

Love's rhythm is strong, Kate. may it soothe you and hold you. Dawn

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on March 25, 2006

Kate,

Simply magnificent; very well done! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))), much love, and continued prayers, as always, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on March 25, 2006

(((((Kate)))))

Beautiful. Beautiful.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on March 25, 2006

Interesting observation you make about rhyme, Kate. I seem to kick into rhyme as well when overwhelmed positively or negatively sometimes as I guess can be seen by my most current poem. Beautiful wriitng here. As you know, you have my prayers and condolences. ~~Nordette

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on March 25, 2006

When children are stressed or in pain they will often rock themselves back and forth, as though the rocking motion will release them. For me, it is being on the water, in a boat or even laying on a raft, that will soothe me through my most difficult times. I believe that meter and rhyme flow from the child within us as I often feel that giddy littl girl in me, when I write with both. Whatever it is, I hope it helps you with your release and that soon you will be on the healing path without the dark cloud of responsibility weighing you down and interrupting your time that should be spent working through your grief. God Bless you, Kate. You are fortunate to have someone you can depend on who can help you in these most difficult of times.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on March 25, 2006

I agree with both Linda and Anita...but then it is a style I'm most content with;-)...A beautiful poem Kate, Creator is truly one that cocoons better than anyone...

Eileen

Reviewed by L. Figgins

Reviewed on March 25, 2006

Stirring affirmation of faith, Kate. Beautiful! The meter and rhyme kicking in may just be the parameters needed in the chaos around you.
Like having "strong arms that coccoon" you. We love you and are keeping you in prayer...

Love, Lin

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on March 25, 2006

This is very beautiful.........and you know, I have a thought about the meter thing coming back to you, especially at this time, I think its like a rocking chair.....its a comfort....like a heart beat.....the steadiness and consistancy, might be sort of a comfort at this time, even if its robotic.......it fits?
yes......this poem is beautiful, written by a beautiful heart.....all the best kate........pax Anita