Breach (poem) by Kate Burnside on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on April 17, 2006

Cool and clean, Kate. Truly elegant. ~~Nordette

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on April 17, 2006

Great write!

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Reviewed on April 17, 2006

Let me see ... passion & peace, are the two compatible? I think so ... Yes, Just like those wild geese!

Love & Light,
Joseph

Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher

Reviewed on April 17, 2006

A beautiful, longing write,
Birgit and Roger

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on April 17, 2006

a longing for passion
that brings with it a peace

May both peace and passion fill your poetic heart, Kate.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on April 16, 2006

If you find it please tell me ;-)Top drawer poetry!
But that's all you know!;-)

Eileen

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on April 16, 2006

Passion is a luxury these days. So many people have no clue how to respect passion. They don't want to slow down enough for savoring. I'm glad you have.
Susan

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on April 16, 2006

like the return of wild geese

such a rich, true poem here, Kate. Happy Easter! Dawn

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on April 16, 2006

The need and longing are clear in this powerful and outstanding write, Kate. Your second stanza sets it all up and your follow-through knocks one out of the park. I love this poem! Happy Easter to you and yours, Kate.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on April 16, 2006

a beautiful and peaceful sigh of passion ... your poetry is growing in depth ... lovely work!

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on April 16, 2006

Your pens keep growing in depth and simplicity. This is what will cause your pens to be read two hundred years from now.

Reviewed by Debashish Haar

Reviewed on April 16, 2006

a waterfall flooding
the parched desert
of my throat < <Wonderful imagery...A free flowing poem, with the parking space for each noun and action of each verb...A very good work, Kate!

D

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on April 16, 2006

Once more to the beach in your waders dear friend.
Have you tried lockets for this condition?
Drunk on thirst, that's a first kinda juxtaposition thingy.
Drink deep from the passion well.
BTW
Bar-th!!!!

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on April 16, 2006

This has a soft lushness about it, a yearning for completion...Splendid writing Kate!
Happy Easter to you
love and peace, Carole

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on April 16, 2006

Alot of yearning in this one...great poetry Sis!!

Happy Easter Kate....may your dreams come true toooooo!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on April 15, 2006

I like the way Joyce sums up this marvelous write of yours.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on April 15, 2006

Kate,

A beautifully mesmerizing write, a deep hunger for love and acceptance. Look no further than here at AD--you have many friends willing to give you the love and words you need.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

May God bless you this Easter, and always, as He has me. :)

Reviewed by F William Broome

Reviewed on April 15, 2006

What a soft and tender plea for the pleasures needed and lived for as a spirited human being. For me, it sneaks up on the wings of those wild geese. This work is pure heart-felt poetry. - Bill

Reviewed by Joyce Hale

Reviewed on April 15, 2006

A touching write, Kate. Tempting in its desires, picturesque in its imagery, and satisfying in its resolve. Well done.

Peace. Joyce

Reviewed by Paul Williams

Reviewed on April 15, 2006

Oi! Burnside, it's pronounced 'Bath' not 'Bar-th', tut! Southerners! LOL! I see'd wot you 'rit on Peter's post...LOl. Totally agree by the way. So to business, get up here and I'll give you a big Northern Hug. Love this little drop of passion, it just oozes off the tongue and leaves one feeling rather weak at the knees...Ahem! must dash dear Kate LOl.

Paul;-)

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on April 15, 2006

This poem and the thoughts perceived from it are wonderful Kate. You manage to stir the senses of the reader and allow them to draw their own feelings into your prose. Well written and a lovely theme.

Felix

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on April 15, 2006

Spartan and unbridled wordage here Kate
You let it all hang out with rip snorting intensity !
Genius is born of passion, and the grains of success are to be found herein, for those of us who wish to learn and aspire...
Peter

Reviewed by Gordon Rosenberg (Reader)

Reviewed on April 15, 2006

this is intense in its desire

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on April 15, 2006

Very clear writing here
Sounds like madness, hunger, and focus.......
craving the cure......and drinking the medicine like a wine........

very intense.......sparse........and POWERFUL Kate :)
pax A

happy hopper day :)