Surrounded by language,
my lungs inhale gaseous thought
and breath out words,
spoken and unsaid.
Seeping through pores in my skin
liquid idea perspires,
quickening my pulse to an exhilarated race
as read cells energise my blood.
Incessant invasive and pervasive tide,
droplets of consciousness fall
on the fine, sandy soil of my being;
they re-emerge charged as linguistic rivulets
searching homewards for the sea.
2. WRITER
I am a Writer:
Confused or enlightened,
my eyes do not hear too well;
my ears do not always see right;
my mind speaks only half-truth
and my lips do not think straight.
Concrete words sometimes throw a curved ball:
I hear the inaudible sound of breaking glass -
a pane in someone's greenhouse soul.
Petalled thoughts at other times produce feathered flowers,
a ribbon of rainbow silk handkerchiefs
or an Alice White Rabbit
as if by magic from a heart's top hat.
3. RESULT
Our collective consciousness connects,
amasses, dissipates;
it ebbs and flows,
comes and goes.
But we give and receive like rings
without beginning or end,
and in our marriage bed
I do not know which one of us is which,
where one stops or the other begins:
aware only of being umbilically attached
and wholly conjoined.
We are essentially One
and passionately in love
with Language:
This is very clever, and well done Kate! I liked third one the most...
D
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on May 6, 2006
Knock me down with a feather, much thought and work has gone into this, and it's result is briliance.
Much is kinda intangible, yet seen in the minds eye, as clear as day.
Plethora of unique and interesting metaphors... Klever Kate, HUH..
To the writer, this fully opens the channel and gives us everything within which to create the words. I read concentrated mind action here, and the nine steps to writers' prosperity: Law of Self-awareness, Law of Wanting, Law of Planning, Law of Releasing, Law of Compensation, Law of Attraction, Law of Visualization, Law of Affirmation, and Law of Loving, your final stanza Kate! The truly successful writers have found and used portions of this path to prosperity. We are now ready to use the mind for its highest potential as a channel of connection with the source of prosperity, our creative imagination.
A glorious composite of creativity that tickles my lingusituic lymphs, thus rivulets going to the big pond LOL. This is wonderful Kate, you deffo get a 'Walnut Whirl'and maybe I'll slip you a 'Coffee Cream'...hmmm maybe should've phrased that better;) LOL! Soz!!! on one today lol.
Why in the world did you keep this masterful write from us for so long, Kate?? This is exceptional writing and you disect and then make cohesive all of the components that make up our love affair with language. Born in a moment of clarity, this poem is pure excellence.
Take care,
Sherry
"Confused or enlightened,
my eyes do not hear too well;
my ears do not always see right;
my mind speaks only half-truth
and my lips do not think straight"
your passion for language emanates from this page, onto the mind of readers and into the collective heart of all poets ... "The Writer And His Enviorment" is a masterwork of the creative spirit ...
What a wonderful way to express this perspective, Kate. And it is a wonderful gift at the same time. Thank you. Love and blessings and all good things to you,
Sweet Kate this one is so true and such a realistic thought progression that I thought you were actually writing about me and my world. We are indeed a truly odd lot and insanity, depression, religious zealotry, insomia are but a few of our quirks and often the drink or drugs as well. Still, at the risk of sounding vain...where would the world be without us. Sweet dreams and a great weekend to you Kate.
Hugs,
Pops
Kate
You give full freedom to your thoughts, as it should be, in this complex and exhilarating repost !
There is a fine and invisible membrane that connects the writer with their surroundings and environment
This is a rich, artistic performance full of nuance !
Peter
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on May 5, 2006
Seems both of us were looking around for answers today, you seem to have found yours. Very good.
From the archives huh?
I love poems about the creative process........
they are universal, yet unique as a thumb print
This is so very Kate!!!
Wise, and informative......I always come away with insight and smiles after reading your mind..........on the screen that is.......
brilliant
Still Living on my Feet is the follow up to Tichaona Chinyelu’s first book, In the Whirlwind, which was rooted in a sense of hard-hitting revolutionary black love. However, in this sophomore effort, Tichaona brings the revolutionary essence from deep
Inspirational poetry, written from the heart and soul. Verses that are well-suited for reading on a rainy day and that are guaranteed to bring a smile to your face.
D
Much is kinda intangible, yet seen in the minds eye, as clear as day.
Plethora of unique and interesting metaphors... Klever Kate, HUH..
Sage
Paul;-)
Top 'cheeky' spy bloke with chocolates
Take care,
Sherry
my eyes do not hear too well;
my ears do not always see right;
my mind speaks only half-truth
and my lips do not think straight"
Only a poetic mind can come up with this...lol!!
Love Tinka
Regis
susan
Hugs,
Pops
Beautifully expressed!
eT
Love, Dove
You give full freedom to your thoughts, as it should be, in this complex and exhilarating repost !
There is a fine and invisible membrane that connects the writer with their surroundings and environment
This is a rich, artistic performance full of nuance !
Peter
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D
Birgit and Roger
I love poems about the creative process........
they are universal, yet unique as a thumb print
This is so very Kate!!!
Wise, and informative......I always come away with insight and smiles after reading your mind..........on the screen that is.......
brilliant
pax A
This is absolutely glorious! I love it--saving it--so inspiring and uniquely imaged! Well done!
(((HUGS))), love and continued prayer, Karla.