strangely beautiful, leaves me with a tingly sort of feeling. can't offer anything more intellectual just now. have to go read Debs poem. great work, Kate. take care, Dawn
I do believe vessels are chosen, by a greater power. Its not a random happenstance. And although initial manifestations of word, might prove awkard to share, or even understand. (poor Joan of Arc) Those prophets do learn to spread the word, and interpert.
Its cyclical, as are so many phases in life, one needs the other to maintain momentium.
Yin and yang, sun and moon
Clueless (me lol)
Brilliant (you!)
Did I get this one right?????
paz
Anita
ps.......no rush on the T shirt.......and I do appreciate the offer :)
hugs!!!
serving as "hope or warning." is so nicely tied by sense impressionism with "Solitary, she unites
and directs society,
her temple and the city
constructed, nurtured
and sustained by
His words."
You have extended and expanded the mixing of senses (which I intended to do) to so much more.
A BRILLIANT WORK, Kate.
I am humbled, and you say that it was inspired by my poem (I am blushing like a little kid, trying to find a corner).
Consider me sustained this is brillo Mizz Moneypenny, you just get better and better dear girl. Were it not for the choc's in my poc's, I'd kneel before thee...lol...too much Amarula lol. Superb Kate!
Paul;-)
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on June 11, 2006
Fascinating: i'm just reading the prophet. many great lines here..
my fav:
She receives back the fruit
from the seed she has sown: <----- how true is that!!!
A finely etched portrait of wings of faith and devotion in full divine flight. Exquisite to behold and thrilling to read. I'll look for GOLDEN CAGE.
Aberjhani
This is a song of praise for and from powerful women. To admire the strengths of another, then write them into a poem, is absolute praise of the highest respect. This is a read worth keeping.
Susan
an outstanding creation of empowered yet eloquent words, formualting poetic idea into the cherished manisfestation of the prophet's domain and the affect of its revelation ... great stuff, Kate ...
Blown away by the insight and sincereity of thsi one Sweet Kate, the phrophet seems direct and guide her with love and kindness which is the way it should be not using threats and blackmail as a lot of religions icons seem to want to use. As a result she becomes almost an extension of him not a puppet of him. Well, well done.
Fee
Reviewed by Candy T (Reader)
Reviewed on June 11, 2006
i read this aloud and found that your words fell off my tongue with such ease- the measure of a carefully crafted tapestry. original and meaningful. really well done, thanks :)
“The woman or man who is a poet, or fiction writer, or playwright, or all of these, is engaged constantly in a jazz ballet of vocabularies, passions, genders, histories, perspectives, death, love, and life. The music of revelation announces itself to
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A strong opening just begs to be read and felt; an excellent, excellent write of its own accord. Thank you for this one.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
I do believe vessels are chosen, by a greater power. Its not a random happenstance. And although initial manifestations of word, might prove awkard to share, or even understand. (poor Joan of Arc) Those prophets do learn to spread the word, and interpert.
Its cyclical, as are so many phases in life, one needs the other to maintain momentium.
Yin and yang, sun and moon
Clueless (me lol)
Brilliant (you!)
Did I get this one right?????
paz
Anita
ps.......no rush on the T shirt.......and I do appreciate the offer :)
hugs!!!
serving as "hope or warning." is so nicely tied by sense impressionism with "Solitary, she unites
and directs society,
her temple and the city
constructed, nurtured
and sustained by
His words."
You have extended and expanded the mixing of senses (which I intended to do) to so much more.
A BRILLIANT WORK, Kate.
I am humbled, and you say that it was inspired by my poem (I am blushing like a little kid, trying to find a corner).
D
Paul;-)
my fav:
She receives back the fruit
from the seed she has sown: <----- how true is that!!!
You need to do a book...
Tami
Love & Light,
Joseph
Aberjhani
I like the tension you created with the her doing the work and the him writing the words.
This one seems a simple interpretation, but it is not! There are deep rivers flowing here.
Richard
Susan
Susan
XX DOVE
I agree with Felix below completely...
I can neither add or substract from his astute and shrewd words.
Peter
Fee