Once again you've signed of on an artistic masterpiece with a superb final line 'The totality of existence is emobidied by Your Name'
I too see Him in the tiny miracles of life...one that I'm a witness to at this time in my life. Thank you for this beautiful piece Kate. I almost feel like we should be paying to read your work it is that good. ;-)
Love Chanti
Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on August 5, 2006
You light up the Den dear Kate..and for that I am ever grateful!
Profound write effusing from a glorious mind heart and soul..bless you!
RISING: precisely the inner sensation that came with reading each of these lines, a sense of stepping up in consciousness to a realization of one's gerater self reflected in an even more encompassing Self that contains all greatness in the singularity of an abiding presence and syllable. A poem with a totally splendid view.
Aberjhani
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on August 3, 2006
Love this one a lot!
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on August 3, 2006
Quick and perky and . . . revealing is this poem of the Id of ourselves, knowing that we are the world, it revolves around us.
What's in a name...an awful lot..
Our name embodies our spirit in an all compassing way..
When you stare into the face of eternity,... you are staring into the face of Infinite Intelligence..
Names play a huge part in marketing, presidents, stars etc. It's a fact in sales that the "right name" gets you in the door. My middle name is Kathryn and it has a bit of magic with it mainly because it's a "family" name handed down in the female line of my mother's side. Kate, Kathryn or Catherine...it's a wondrous name for me and much love comes with this name...from experience. This pen is different for a pen and much appreciated.
Susan
VEry awesome write and I am sure the words whispered to the creator in your voice will be heard loud and clear. The poets dream of the skies and the stars and the magic of what is out there and the beauty of the promise life hereafter and she does it with style, poise and grace. Ah Sweet Kate sometimes your heart is so spiritual I think you may be part angel, (I won't suggest what they other part is, lol)Anyway very good write with nice images floating to the heavens and a good message to reinforce the here after.
Dave? Oi! Mizz MP I've just gone dun your last one not two sec's ago...Lol, my fault, this is me trying to catch up. Shan't bore you with details of reasons why?...tell you Tuesday lol. I love this, it's got that ahhhh! oooo! mmm! thing about it, a beautifully romantic thing that makes one sigh and wish for the experience now. It's A1 superbo!
Robin Ouzman Hislop's poetry is certainly in dialogue with some of the key architects of the 'poetics of indeterminacy' – both the Modernist strands represented by the likes of Beckett and Stein, and the postmodernist strands represented, initially,
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Enter the pages of diaspora in quiet introspection. Bathe your thoughts with subtle humor; synchronize your spirit-sense with history-in-heat; fall headlong with eyes wide open into
I too see Him in the tiny miracles of life...one that I'm a witness to at this time in my life. Thank you for this beautiful piece Kate. I almost feel like we should be paying to read your work it is that good. ;-)
Love Chanti
Profound write effusing from a glorious mind heart and soul..bless you!
Vesna:)
Pray that we will preserve the tiny miracles of life
thanks for sharing
love and peace
Eileen
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D
Beautiful work!!!
The global mysteries of fame:
The totality of existence
is embodied by Your Name
Extremely captivating words and thoughts, Kate.
Aberjhani
What's in a name...an awful lot..
Our name embodies our spirit in an all compassing way..
When you stare into the face of eternity,... you are staring into the face of Infinite Intelligence..
Love and Prayers
Peter
Susan
This is gorgeous, enlightened poetry, truly majestic. Richard has it right: REFRESHING breeze from your pen! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Fee
Really though KB ... This construct was like opening a window in a stuffy room. A refreshing breeze indeed!
In fraternity ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
Paul;-)
Love Tinka
Love and Peace, B&R