Another from my Spanish bag... and not a blue stretchy top in sight!! (Have changed my Biog picture, folks, but it WASN'T a bathin suit, honest!) :)) LOL K xx
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He dives into her,
splices and scythes her liquid flesh
Yo- I see some action goin' on, in these action words! GREAT Kate!!! I love it! YOur style has changed drastically and with such creativity since I've had to be gone. I'm glad I am back, I missed reading you and feeling your heart beat! I hope your well and I'm feelin' I missed something, but please know- I hope your happy and well. YOur poem shows it for sure! Love and Light! WArmly, *She* :)
Wow Kate! With such effective personification, you've etched a three-dimensional creation that literally vibrates with energy. I think I need a dictionary to source new superlatives when reviewing your work. I seem to run out of them. ;-)
Chanti
Should I move the one in the back yard to my bedroom! Great one Kate...wish I'd written it, but mine wouldn;lt hold a candle to yours!
I think I'm going to Spain.
Love,
Taylor
Liquid refreshment in passionate verse...dang! Gonna have to take a cold shower...and not just from the neverending heat wave! Good on you, Kate, excellent!
Look at you!!! Your pen is a vortex of passion swimming in and out like dolphins mating. This is a cool passionate respite for all of us bathing in our own perspiration down here in Dixie.
I read your bio and discovered the path relating to Kenny Mcphee Baez. I brought him here and he brought you here so...pass it on. Great poetess you are Miss Kate and a fluid one at that!!
Come on over here for a visit and bring Kenny too.
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on August 7, 2006
Sounds like a good damn way to lose yourself. Wait for me.
wow........sexy write Kate.....
man going back to the womb........
this is very suggestive lol........and I am keeping it
so creative......so mysterious.......so Kate!
pax A
Using Calgary as a backdrop the author satirizes the self-serving nature of the public as it continues to fatten itself, not only physically, but egotistically as well.
Regis
Love it!
Love and peace, B&R
Aberjhani
Chanti
I think I'm going to Spain.
Love,
Taylor
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
But know I will be tere in spirit sis....if you feel something tickle your ear know it's me sitting on you shoulder watching ya!!
Go easy on the SMIRNOFF ICE and to boys.....damn I am pissed -off now not being part of the party!!!!!!
Love TINKA :((((((((((
I read your bio and discovered the path relating to Kenny Mcphee Baez. I brought him here and he brought you here so...pass it on. Great poetess you are Miss Kate and a fluid one at that!!
Come on over here for a visit and bring Kenny too.
I'll take a dip too...:)
Very passionate write Kate..
Spain is good for you...LOLS
Love and Peace
Peter
man going back to the womb........
this is very suggestive lol........and I am keeping it
so creative......so mysterious.......so Kate!
pax A