I love the grace and agility of your acrobatic mind...
You can walk a tight-rope of poetry with your eyes closed...
Cryssa :~)
Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on November 27, 2006
Yes! This says it all with verve and vitality only the great Kate can bring to us. It is verse that is almost "eye-twinkling" in its perky imagery.
Hugs
I'm glad you got your second wind and posted this wonderful gem of a write, Kate. "And the moon walks by on stilts." What an image! trees roling stars on shoulders, WOW! Just totally adored this poem. ~~Nordette
What a burst of sensation this poem is, Kate. You had me feeling each line and recalling the times when each of those things was a heavy burden upon me...and then came the dawn, when the miracle of dreams brought me refreshed into a new day filled with promise and hope. If there is a line in this that is not a perfect 10, I certainly can't find it. Wonderful, wonderful write.
Take care,
Sherry
No matter how tired you give extraordinary pieces of yourself!
Astonishing poem, every line superb!
ET
Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on November 22, 2006
OOh I always love your Poetess wordsmith way with words trhe imagery , metaphors, discriptions gotta save this to read over and over. A pure delight.... Thanks Kate!!!!!!:)
Happy Turkey Day
Imagery. Fresh imagry, unimagined imagery. clever imagery, and, yes, a special brand of Burnside imagery (Kate kind, that is) ! ! !
I had to go back and read for the third time... to make sure you weren't writing from Hollywood or Disney Planet. Extra well done. And, if this is what they teach in the school where you studied... move over, and maybe they won't notice me. I'm indebted to ya' !
- Bill
A real assimilable write Kate, one that is easy for the reader to relate too.
It is good to have the hope that tomorrow will reveal another gem for us on life's enigmatic path. Lotta funky mudholes to navigate these days.
Light and Wisdom ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on November 22, 2006
Dear Kate,
Many a day I have been to this point when I discover that the best thing is to "put up all the lights" and go to sleep with that thrilling expectation of the "fresh theatre of dawn".
This write and your spirit make each new day and explosion of life and living and when I read your work it is always infectious. Sweet Kate you have an eternal smile welded into your makeup and it shows in almost every one of your writes. I cannot say how much I would miss your work if we should ever lose your presence on the den.
Hugs,
Fee (Pops)
Great write...great use of metaphors very descriptive write...I loved the line; my legs as heavy as escape artist's chains...sometimes my legs feel as this.
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
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You can walk a tight-rope of poetry with your eyes closed...
Cryssa :~)
Hugs
Art Sun.....
Regis
Yup wake up bright eyed n bushy tailed.. Fabo' one kate
Take care,
Sherry
Astonishing poem, every line superb!
ET
Happy Turkey Day
I had to go back and read for the third time... to make sure you weren't writing from Hollywood or Disney Planet. Extra well done. And, if this is what they teach in the school where you studied... move over, and maybe they won't notice me. I'm indebted to ya' !
- Bill
LOL.....just wondering...hmmmm...okay nevermind...enjoyed the read!!
Love Tinka
It is good to have the hope that tomorrow will reveal another gem for us on life's enigmatic path. Lotta funky mudholes to navigate these days.
Light and Wisdom ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
Many a day I have been to this point when I discover that the best thing is to "put up all the lights" and go to sleep with that thrilling expectation of the "fresh theatre of dawn".
Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph*
Hugs,
Fee (Pops)
Carole
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
Rusty
That's gotta hurt!
roll stars across their shoulders" Fantastic!
Love,
CJ