beautiful write my friend and full of passion and romance. It reminds me much of reading the bible...inside the pages of the bible type of story one wants to read is available....romance, murder, mystery, action, you name it's there. Your poem is cleverly woven together with threads from a variety of styles, that's what takes the reader to places that allow their own thoughts and inspirations to soar! Great write my friend, I enjoyed this very much.
Blessings and happy holidays,
Joyce Bowling
there's nothing left to say... this is one I will reread and marvel at again and again. top drawer and evidence of your naked talent in a poem sculpted to perfection. Dawn
As the title suggests there are notable similarities here that came to mind and the passion of the words you wrote touch my heart while the sensuality of the images stirred my loins. I can see you smile even as you read this Sweet Kate, but perhaps that was your purpose so to speak. This is a powerful write and one that could contain controversial overtures if one were to look for them but I love it completely. Brilliant my dear, brilliant.
Niiiiiiccce Legs...mmm...what's this about? LOLOLOL, sorry Mizz P, I'm in one of 'dem moods. Actually this is yummy sensual, superbly seductive and frightfully good (actually it's Brill). By the way which bits are double jointed? lol.
This is the money line! Multi-FACETED shine, Kate B., you polish and cut poetry as precise as a diamond-cutter, although diamonds are a complete non-essential item...Paragon of Magdela is seductively rich! Every word filament, a meticulously, polished facet strung on a silver strand...
"and diamond dot your navel
with the tip of my tongue."
Sage
Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on December 5, 2006
Kate,
the expressions of emotions of love of adoration in this one is stunning and beautiful YOU wordsmith QUEEN!!!!!!!!!!!:) Excellent work {HUGS}Joselyn Ty
After wondering for months why Kate didn't 'Go there.' I aghast with what you have composed It is surely the best... in conception and description. What a delightful way to know the essence of giving LOVE. Ah. to be a Prince... for once night! With respect and Kudos - - Bill
Now this is good, both in its poetic verse and imaginative 'pose'.
Rusty
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on December 5, 2006
When it can be said that you are clothed such as this descriptive poem portrays, you can say that you have been fully and completely clothed to the nth. Very nice . . .
Under Amber Skies, written by author and poet Jill Eisnaugle, is a wonderful collection of rhyming poetry guaranteed to please every reader. In this, her second book, she writes of new friendships kindled, as well as old friendships solidified. She g
Using Calgary as a backdrop the author satirizes the self-serving nature of the public as it continues to fatten itself, not only physically, but egotistically as well.
This collection of poetry addresses the nature of time, reflections on the natural world, the difficulty of loss,
contemporary social issues and gratitude for life.
Love it!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
Blessings and happy holidays,
Joyce Bowling
Love, B&R
so erotic .........starts out bibical in suggestion, then turns to stunning romance...
wow
Regis
Fee
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Paul;-)
"and diamond dot your navel
with the tip of my tongue."
Sage
the expressions of emotions of love of adoration in this one is stunning and beautiful YOU wordsmith QUEEN!!!!!!!!!!!:) Excellent work {HUGS}Joselyn Ty
Love and respect,
CJ
Blimey sis this is bloody good!!
Love Tinka
Rusty