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Paragon of Magdela
by Kate Burnside → (All Poetry by Kate Burnside)
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PARAGON OF MAGDELA


I buff your brazen feet with my hair
until my face in them shines;

smooth the seam of your calves
with the flat of my palms

and align the curves of your thigh
with the back of my hands.

I curtain the cup of your loin
with lantern husk of my hips,
girdle your waist with my arms

and diamond dot your navel
with the tip of my tongue.

Softly, my breath sequins
the velvet cushion of your chest,
as I pierce your ear with the pearl
of my sigh.

Your head I crown with garland kisses
rained against your temples.

Let others call you “naked”, my Prince,
for we know you are stocking’d
in silken meshes of my love.


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 Reviews of "Paragon of Magdela"
Reviewed on July 12, 2007
I absolutely love this Kate, thank you for sharing it with me. I too have always related to Magdalene.

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
Reviewed on January 7, 2007
This is so passionate, so sensual from the diamond dot to the pearl of your sigh...Wow!
Love it!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on December 10, 2006
beautiful write my friend and full of passion and romance. It reminds me much of reading the bible...inside the pages of the bible type of story one wants to read is available....romance, murder, mystery, action, you name it's there. Your poem is cleverly woven together with threads from a variety of styles, that's what takes the reader to places that allow their own thoughts and inspirations to soar! Great write my friend, I enjoyed this very much.
Blessings and happy holidays,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on December 9, 2006
Beautiful, romantic and passionate!
Love, B&R

Reviewed on December 9, 2006
Very moving pen Kate, very moving

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on December 9, 2006
wow
so erotic .........starts out bibical in suggestion, then turns to stunning romance...
wow

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on December 9, 2006
You touch the very core of passion with this sensuous write.

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on December 8, 2006
brilliant...love the "diamond dot" line....

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on December 6, 2006
The lady Jesus loved, her selflessness is shown well here, a fine example for us all....Top write Kate..

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on December 6, 2006
WOW!

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
Reviewed on December 6, 2006
Beautiful!

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on December 5, 2006
brilliant poem ... your images invoke the protective passion of the flesh's deepest desires and the soul's finest embrace ...

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on December 5, 2006
there's nothing left to say... this is one I will reread and marvel at again and again. top drawer and evidence of your naked talent in a poem sculpted to perfection. Dawn

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on December 5, 2006
Ooooooooooh. What incredible sentiments, Kate. Wow. I'm left quite wordless as my heart speeds up. Love to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on December 5, 2006
Very nice

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on December 5, 2006
As the title suggests there are notable similarities here that came to mind and the passion of the words you wrote touch my heart while the sensuality of the images stirred my loins. I can see you smile even as you read this Sweet Kate, but perhaps that was your purpose so to speak. This is a powerful write and one that could contain controversial overtures if one were to look for them but I love it completely. Brilliant my dear, brilliant.

Fee

Reviewed on December 5, 2006
Nice poem Kate!!! Your poetic talent is at its best!!! This one is sooooo creative!!! A joy to read!!!!!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Paul Williams
Reviewed on December 5, 2006
Niiiiiiccce Legs...mmm...what's this about? LOLOLOL, sorry Mizz P, I'm in one of 'dem moods. Actually this is yummy sensual, superbly seductive and frightfully good (actually it's Brill). By the way which bits are double jointed? lol.

Paul;-)

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on December 5, 2006
This is the money line! Multi-FACETED shine, Kate B., you polish and cut poetry as precise as a diamond-cutter, although diamonds are a complete non-essential item...Paragon of Magdela is seductively rich! Every word filament, a meticulously, polished facet strung on a silver strand...

"and diamond dot your navel
with the tip of my tongue."

Sage

Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on December 5, 2006
Kate,
the expressions of emotions of love of adoration in this one is stunning and beautiful YOU wordsmith QUEEN!!!!!!!!!!!:) Excellent work {HUGS}Joselyn Ty

Reviewed by F William Broome
Reviewed on December 5, 2006
After wondering for months why Kate didn't 'Go there.' I aghast with what you have composed It is surely the best... in conception and description. What a delightful way to know the essence of giving LOVE. Ah. to be a Prince... for once night! With respect and Kudos - - Bill

Reviewed by CJ Heck
Reviewed on December 5, 2006
Wow, Kate -- this is very seductive and oh so lovely. You did an excellent job here!
Love and respect,
CJ

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on December 5, 2006
This is poetic perfection Kate!!

Blimey sis this is bloody good!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Rusty Daily
Reviewed on December 5, 2006
Now this is good, both in its poetic verse and imaginative 'pose'.
Rusty

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on December 5, 2006
When it can be said that you are clothed such as this descriptive poem portrays, you can say that you have been fully and completely clothed to the nth. Very nice . . .

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on December 5, 2006
... And I'm ahead of you, Turner, with your potential jokes about double-jointedness! :))


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