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SPRING
Delicately nuzzling forwards,
not breaking rank,
sniffing air’s new stringent turn,
branches, nodding, advance slowly
like timid pregnant deer,
craning hoary soft-skinned antlers,
tentative horns fresh-velvetted green.
Shedding dull tweed of bramble winter,
they glide through wires,
leap over walls
and slip between close-boards of fences,
leaving pale bare behind.
Ghost of winter, past.
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Awesome WRite Kate!
I want Spring too~
I can feel it poking through~
WArmest Blessings and HuGs,WArrior Sheeeooxx
Love,
Eileen
spring. Love your visulisations, Always!
piece of work.
You are top drawer (oh...did I say that before?)
Well, I'll say it again...
You've a gifted pen.
Hugs,
AMF
Kate~ this imagery and the creative way you spell it out, only enhances my senses more, springing me into another creativity!
I love when this happens!
and I Love this!
Love and Peace~
kimmy~
This pome reminds me of a farquarson painting..
Luv Ya!!
Love Tinka
well done,
peace,
carolyn
This is beautiful in a winter's way!
Love,
Susan
Your words breathed life into that timid pregnant deer. Beautifully written.
Blessings,
Sharon
Love and Hugs,
Taylor
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
A delicious and tempting take on change of season. - Bill
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn. :D
Succinct imagery captures the advent of the growing (hoping) season! Beautifully penned; thank you, you've warmed the place where the ice box used to be, me heart! :)
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.