I walk daily to the houseboat,
where lace-cuffed waters
gurgle harbourside;
when evening sun’s a
dental mirror in milky mouth of sky
and the late-day haze hovers gauzily,
curtaining my mind.
Beached aloft on its concrete base
it shares a weedy pebbled sandbar
with several two-tone-honking geese
and many tiny scooting plovers,
moving like one misted breath,
low and close as single-thought,
like an embroiderer’s needle darting
in and out of liquid light as if it was their loom.
I climb onto its storm-ravaged deck,
mounted on blackened barnacled legs,
and sit awhile to meditate
the wind, the waves, the ways in which
the bobbing boats at anchor know always
which way to turn, facing head to wind.
As yet, the shuttered houseboat remains
silently unclaimed and I will come here still –
until the time that someone says
that this is not my home.
I had to come over to read this first...the inspirations that sit quietly, waiting for someone to notice the treasures that lie beneath the surface...
yes~ an excellent penning with imagery and emotion that lands me on your shores!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
I agree with Phyllis: it is outstanding. Your gift of imagery put me right there. Water often pops in my poetry; it is one of the most relaxing agents we can find, but there's more to it within this poem. It seems the poet's soul is in that house making the house metaphor for life. Loved the images you put in my mind, even if my interpretation is way off... it's happened. :-))
O u t s t a n d i n g ~~!! I remember the first time I saw a houseboat. It sat among others of its kind on a little hairpin river near a bend Indians marked by carving a notch in a tree. In time, Marked Tree, Arkansas sprang up. My father grew up there. Before my parents split, we spent part of summer vacation in Marked Tree. The houseboats were the farthest thing from fancy. Mosquitoes were terrible. But there was something about the idea of living on the water. I was a child with romantic notions, and even I could see there was a downside. Still. . .there was just something. Thank you for reminding me. Never stop writing!! 'Pea' <3
Reading this took me back to my childhood (Wow! What a memory, you say).
Dotted around our village were colliery slag heaps. Me and a pal claimed one of these as our own. It was shaped like a pyramid. The top was concaved which allowed us to put a roof of branches over it under which we could then crawl in and shelter. We lined the inside with moss - Axminster slate to slate moss, luxury. It was actually our truant place. From our vantage point we could watch for the school bus returning, which was our cue to skid down and blend in with the other pupils (nosey buggers they were: 'Where have you two been? Sharrup!).
Like the boat house, we occupied our humble abode a wee until the day we were told by a hungry JCB that it was no longer ours.
It left me the feeling I would get when
we went into the prarie and come across
these old deserted houses. A different setting
but...it was like pure meditation, for sure. ;)
You write so visually and it captures me, always.
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on March 29, 2007
Well it's not my home Kate. Albeit I'd love to live on a narrow boat navigating the canals, or have a luxury houseboat, I'd even make do with a boat at Brighton Marina..LOL
One can feel, touch and taste England in many of your poems. Sometimes I forget how blessed we are, Till I look at my 65 years old photo of Winnie..
Like most Anglos you have salt water in that blood of yours.
Dunno why, but this has a Wordsworth feel, yet he wrote his stuff up the lake district..
I can vision those honking geese, the clumsey things make me laugh, unless I'm chased by them, worse than German sheperds...
>>>>when evening sun’s a
dental mirror in milky mouth of sky < < < <
fabulous image. just loved this. thanks for taking me down to the houseboat with you. it was a journey I would repeat time and time again. hope you are filled with peace and joy down by the sea. Dawn
I climb onto its storm-ravaged deck,
mounted on blackened barnacled legs,
and sit awhile to meditate
Some of my best, and some of my most frightening times, have been spent aboard houseboats. Almost died while aboard one anchored off a place called Cemetery Island!
Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on March 29, 2007
Oh...how inviting, Kate!!!
And how, with your usual brilliance at images and feelings...you've made us a 'visitor,' as well.
Hugs,
AMF
Ahhhhh, the sweet mystery of an unlocked, unused, unavailable houseboat! What a neighbor to flirt with, and win... and it must be in good hands for it shows no sign of deterioration. Good luck on using its deck as your secret. // You have the making of another poem in your crafty words: "...will come here still – until the time that someone says that this is not my home." I keep borrowing places like that, and rarely am I asked, "Wah-For?" // Tell King Richard to get a fast boat to match his keen and youthful mind ! ! ! / / Love your poem, and you for writing it for us. - Bill
as usual, Kate, your imagery is remarkably honed, allowing your readers the opportunity to visualize the terrain of your thought as well as the unraveling experience that inspired it ... conceptually moving and creatively powered by the depth of your heart and the clarity of your intellect ... you obviously have an affinity with this houseboat yet a willingness to sail beyond it ...
Alive and swimming in sweet metaphors. The poet makes the reader so much part of the lapping waves around the little white houseboat, the scent of the sea air..just great.
Gorgeous KB! I am going to write the principal and tell him that you've passed the audition!
I've seen this houseboat once before in one of your poems last year. At that time I thought you would be moving into it.
For a writer, to be able to set up anywhere besides in front of the bloody desktop, is to die for. You have captured that here admirably in this delightfully image laden write.
I'd like to put a little motor on that thing and putt around the bay. While I was I'd be looking for nude female magicians who were sharing the moment with the sun and their tanning oil, chortling occasionally, because they had discovered a heart-shaped shell that, like a fortune cookie, had a special message inside for the finder.
I would propose, Kate, that words are your home and you use them wonderfully well to take the reader to places they will never go.
I always enjoy your unique phrases.
Rusty
Ah that to me is my idea of heaven for a writer, I would love to spend a summer on a retreat like that just dreaming of the world at large and going to sleep with the lullaby of the waves splashing against the pilings and being awakened by the sea birds call. Beautiful Sweet Kate this write transported me there if only for a minute in time. Thank you for sharing another beautiful work of art.
Oh Kate, this is lovely. I've always fantasized about living and writing on a houseboat. It must be wonderful -- to hear the water lapping at the sides while you pen your poetry. Dreamy!
Love,
CJ
You've attached your soul to a harbored vessel of many stories that have weathered the storm, Kate...claim this treasure, unboard the windows and sell dreams...would make a neat bookcover for your poetry...this line is priceless, "dental mirror in milky mouth of sky." Be well, Kate...Blessed Be.
If you tend to believe romantic, passionate, masculine poetry is a thing of past eras, read "She Intrigues Me," and be swept away in the beautiful craft of a contemporary poet of love.
Each person is but a grain of sand resting beside the sea. This thought sets the tone for Jill Eisnaugle’s latest poetry collection, Beside Still Waters.
yes~ an excellent penning with imagery and emotion that lands me on your shores!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
Aberjhani
Love,
Susan
Carmen
Dotted around our village were colliery slag heaps. Me and a pal claimed one of these as our own. It was shaped like a pyramid. The top was concaved which allowed us to put a roof of branches over it under which we could then crawl in and shelter. We lined the inside with moss - Axminster slate to slate moss, luxury. It was actually our truant place. From our vantage point we could watch for the school bus returning, which was our cue to skid down and blend in with the other pupils (nosey buggers they were: 'Where have you two been? Sharrup!).
Like the boat house, we occupied our humble abode a wee until the day we were told by a hungry JCB that it was no longer ours.
Empathy, here, empathy.
Dai
Wish I could find a house like that.....would search for the owner an d buy it!!
A little place to connect with the higher power ALONE!!
Love Tinka
we went into the prarie and come across
these old deserted houses. A different setting
but...it was like pure meditation, for sure. ;)
You write so visually and it captures me, always.
One can feel, touch and taste England in many of your poems. Sometimes I forget how blessed we are, Till I look at my 65 years old photo of Winnie..
Like most Anglos you have salt water in that blood of yours.
Dunno why, but this has a Wordsworth feel, yet he wrote his stuff up the lake district..
I can vision those honking geese, the clumsey things make me laugh, unless I'm chased by them, worse than German sheperds...
Anglo Andy x
dental mirror in milky mouth of sky < < < <
fabulous image. just loved this. thanks for taking me down to the houseboat with you. it was a journey I would repeat time and time again. hope you are filled with peace and joy down by the sea. Dawn
mounted on blackened barnacled legs,
and sit awhile to meditate
Some of my best, and some of my most frightening times, have been spent aboard houseboats. Almost died while aboard one anchored off a place called Cemetery Island!
And how, with your usual brilliance at images and feelings...you've made us a 'visitor,' as well.
Hugs,
AMF
Your visuals and descriptive powers fascinate me. Gently, you capture the senses.
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
Be safe,
Karen
Stunningly imaged in graphic and verse, you took me there: thank you. You know you always have a home here at the Den--and in my heart!
(((HUGS))), love and prayer, Karla.
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D
I've seen this houseboat once before in one of your poems last year. At that time I thought you would be moving into it.
For a writer, to be able to set up anywhere besides in front of the bloody desktop, is to die for. You have captured that here admirably in this delightfully image laden write.
I'd like to put a little motor on that thing and putt around the bay. While I was I'd be looking for nude female magicians who were sharing the moment with the sun and their tanning oil, chortling occasionally, because they had discovered a heart-shaped shell that, like a fortune cookie, had a special message inside for the finder.
You rock the Casbah Brit girl.
Light and Wisdom and (((((((((((HUGS)))))))))))
I always enjoy your unique phrases.
Rusty
hugs
Fee
Love,
CJ
Sage