"On its energy you rise breathless,
scaling the elliptical lighthouse stairs
to embrace illumination"
Genius use of prose my cherished friend! I love the subject of our symbolic yet personal search for truth....the hunger to know who we are and precisely why we are here in Gods master plan......As always, an excellent lyrical journey you have shared with us to enjoy. His peace to you and yours Kate.
Oh Kate each verse of this is a story and a poem onto itself..so much sharp imagery used here I reread twice savoring each picture as you offered them up like sweet candy to be savored for their richness. Wonderful stuff and our favorite sea thread thrown in as well.
Hugs
Fee
I like the symbols, the analogy and the seeming paradox (which isn't). I also liked the way you tied it up, so neatly. This is like feasting on ten course meal in a seven star restaurent. Great job!
I had to read this a couple of times, so
very wonderful it is Kate. We are all of us
on this "Search" aren't we? Just an excellent
vision you have and it is You.
a brilliant introspective analysis probing into the folds of consciousness as it ascends to the beacon to the "other," a mirror reflection of who we are to become ...
I was writing on this very premise recently, but you did it
to perfection! I think there are a plethora of ways to view
ourselves and all of them have merit, Splendid poem Kate!
Glad about my pottery, Sweetheart... I'll keep all me limp posies of poesie in it!! :)) xoxox Hay sheds are very inspiring literary places... Ask Thomas Hardy, Dylan Thomas, Sir Uncle Tom Cobbley and all...!! K xx
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on May 1, 2007
Illumination..Good ad for Paul Wellers CD..
That apart. LOL at Nicky, you ain't got a twin of any kind, this is a warming pleasing poem to the senses, I too love the opening of your first stanza..
How does a farmers daughter rise out of the hay shed, and write with such unique brilliance, your potery will out live your mortal body for eons..
"On its energy you rise breathless
scaling the elliptical lighthouse of stairs
to embrace illumination ..."
Did me lightning pic inspire this? LOL This is a StormSpinner beginning and continues in inimitable Kate passion and FIRE! I wish I had written this, yes. BRAVA!!
Lovely! Life is just like that - well described - lightly penned, so easy to read and contemplate idea - walnut brain - i love that image, 2nd and 4th stanzinis are very good, last three lines super! Nice one Kate, Nicky x (a Gemini, which makes thing a bit tricky LOL! oh dear...*slaps self twice*:))
the words spiraled as i read them "This the quest of spooled reflection,
cloaked mirror’s ravelled “other”
that reveals yourself to you" my favorite stanza
First Edition Translation of Teselas by Carmen Crespo X111 César Simón Poetry Prixe 2016 Translated from Spanish by Robin Ouzman Hislop and Amparo Arrospíde
scaling the elliptical lighthouse stairs
to embrace illumination"
Genius use of prose my cherished friend! I love the subject of our symbolic yet personal search for truth....the hunger to know who we are and precisely why we are here in Gods master plan......As always, an excellent lyrical journey you have shared with us to enjoy. His peace to you and yours Kate.
Bill :-)
Hugs
Fee
very wonderful it is Kate. We are all of us
on this "Search" aren't we? Just an excellent
vision you have and it is You.
Love Tinka
Fascinating, Kate. Perhaps you were a Lighthouse Keeper's Wife, in one of those prior lives of yours.
Be safe,
Karen
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
to perfection! I think there are a plethora of ways to view
ourselves and all of them have merit, Splendid poem Kate!
Eileen
Love, B&R
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D
That apart. LOL at Nicky, you ain't got a twin of any kind, this is a warming pleasing poem to the senses, I too love the opening of your first stanza..
How does a farmers daughter rise out of the hay shed, and write with such unique brilliance, your potery will out live your mortal body for eons..
This is glorious!! I love the opening stanza,
"On its energy you rise breathless
scaling the elliptical lighthouse of stairs
to embrace illumination ..."
Did me lightning pic inspire this? LOL This is a StormSpinner beginning and continues in inimitable Kate passion and FIRE! I wish I had written this, yes. BRAVA!!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
cloaked mirror’s ravelled “other”
that reveals yourself to you" my favorite stanza