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About Face
by Kate Burnside → (All Poetry by Kate Burnside)
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I have no idea why, but this little prose piece makes me feel all Christmassy... :)) xx


ABOUT FACE


She was pale like the moon, shy and discreet. Her life a predictable pattern – ordained, beautiful. And quiet. But he blazed like the sun; all women basked in the heat of his burning attention. No-one could predict his moves, only await the sudden fire of his rays.

Funny though, they always met in the between-times of grey: daybreak and dusk. Working in the same city tower block, somehow, in the glint of the foyer’s revolving doors, daily their paths collided in a flashing whorl of low-slant light. Here they carouselled in a flying wheel of windows, a glazed vortex between worlds.

Once, time suspended and night and day exchanged. Always aware of his eyes upon her, she ignored his gaze until the day the doors ran slow, then slower still, until finally they stopped. Turning, she placed her palm against his through the flat of the separating glass. She raised her eyes and her lips moved:

“Can I kiss you?” he read.

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Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on December 8, 2007
One of your very finest Kate!!

Love tinka

Reviewed by Keith Rowley
Reviewed on December 8, 2007
A bodice ripper?!!!

Heh Heh!!

Keith

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on December 7, 2007
ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

could be a movie script!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

more.....
ahem
more please
please sir, can I have some more!!!!
muuhhaahaaa
pax A

Reviewed by Barbara Smith
Reviewed on December 7, 2007
Kate, this kept me glued...this calls for more!!

Reviewed on December 7, 2007
Beautiful pen Kate. Best wishes for the holidays to you and yours

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on December 7, 2007
Sounds like the beginning of a grand Christmas story to me, Kate.

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on December 7, 2007
Kate,

I found this quite sad. Something so beautiful and always an obstacle to seperate or overcome. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on December 6, 2007
Wonderful writing sweet lady,stay safe and well...Hugssss

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on December 6, 2007
A little change of format for you Dear Kate and I like it tremendously. The girls slow look at love from the protection of the glass seems so real or perhaps sureal and then when time stands still and that protective barrier is still suspending time and space between them she offers herself to him...now the answer aways the restart of the revolving door...

Fee

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
Reviewed on December 6, 2007
this was a delight to read, kate!

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on December 6, 2007
this is sweet! I enjoyed it

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on December 6, 2007
when revolving doors slow down, it's all about face and what the motion of the eyes reveal ...

delightful tale, Kate ...

Reviewed on December 6, 2007
BEAUTIFUL, shining prose, illuminated beauty in exquisite detail...sigh. Wonderful, Kate, indeed, Christmassy!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on December 6, 2007
A beautiful, heartwarming tale filled with love and desire. A very warm tale for this time of year.....

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on December 6, 2007
Yup you may, if you must, or even if you must not, lol...

Love it, full of Xmas love.. and those who know you will understand your mystic perfect love....

Reviewed by Ted Bossis
Reviewed on December 6, 2007
Big fan of kissing <> Big fan of yours <> This is one more reason <>Evol~Ted

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on December 6, 2007
Made me think of an ugly duckling who should not have been at the point in time that she was, but she was so that is that. Now what is she going to do, nobody wants her because she is an ugly duckling, she even quacks when she talks and waddles when she walks. But from somewhere in the room there was a glow from this guy, who was dog ugly too, but since they were both dogs they decided to get hung up together. You write effective too . . .

Reviewed by Nicky Goodman
Reviewed on December 6, 2007
SuperExcellent Flash - 2 fine character studies and an ending that is perfect - okay -what did she really say?! lol, Nicky :o)xx

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on December 6, 2007
MY kind of fantasy. This is magnificent. Move over Hallmark Channel this one will win an award. Keep it going Kate. Make a movie here/ a screenplay!
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on December 6, 2007
Glass can keep us apart but lets us see the beauty outside. Nice prose

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on December 6, 2007
Reminescent of the movie, "Lady Hawke." Lovers always missing each other by a glint of the suns rays.

Walt

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on December 6, 2007
hmmmm reminds me of when the moon and sun meet each day, an exchange of a moment,,,This is most stunning.
Christine :)

Reviewed on December 6, 2007
Kate this had me enthralled! Wonderful story, warmly emotive.

Reviewed on December 6, 2007
Beautiful prose piece, Kate; very well penned! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D


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