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The Seal
by Kate Burnside → (All Poetry by Kate Burnside)
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Have been rummaging through last year's poetry bag to see what never hit the light of day... Here's one from early July. K xx


THE SEAL


The heart is an unarmoured mollusc,
a fleshy sticky-bud, moist with life.

Vibrant, it sends out its electrifying sensors
to swim in darting packs, trawling deep waters
of unseen unknown, gathering quicksilver reflections,
finding freedoms in warm currents of liberating truths:
It shoals.

Looming-shadow predators darkly emerge
with cavernous, nerve-crunching jaws and
flesh-shredding teeth, causing heart’s feelers
to withdraw, to conceal itself behind
spiny-coated barricades, snailing up inside.

This then the shell, the hell
where threatening dangers – phantom or real –
enforce a solitary incarceration;
under heavily-guarded sentence,
heart’s colour drains, its life leeched
like clean-picked bone.

Healing comes when,
with diver’s light descending,
it prises away all barnacled pain
and liberates the pearl of teardrops within.

Love to love adheres, a silky-stockinged
chainmail that coats the heart afresh,
a sheath of softened wax that only
each to other melts and tentatively opens:

The Seal.

So vulnerable, the heart,
and awkward when beached and bleached;

so gracefully saturated-heavy
when swimming in its element
of love’s many tumbling waters.




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Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on January 26, 2008
Regis said it all.

Walt

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on January 21, 2008
I never fail to be awed by your poetic images, Kate! This one is no exception, and I am glad that you re-entered it here on the Den. The title drew me to it, and I was engulfed in the vortex of your vivid
images within.
Your bio portrait is quite an image, too, m'dear. A lovely woman you are, indeed!

Reviewed by Axilea MU
Reviewed on January 20, 2008
A poem of true love, difficulty, shells and barricades and the need - the risk and beauty - of opening up, looking for the pearl within. These are the kind of thoughts and feelings I have when I read your poem. I love the way you bring about the vision of "healing"...



This is not the first time I have the feeling of a familiar universe and imagery in your poems. Some kind of similarity - with many inspiring and thrilling differences :-) - in the themes and images chosen... If you ever read "soft meat", "inside the shell" or even "living toy", you will probably feel this too...



Anyway, great work and a title that speaks to me.



Axilea


Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on January 15, 2008
somehow missed this poem ... so many finely crafted images ... conceptually stimulating... makes an vibrant and attentive poem ... i would luv to hear this poem recited ...

Reviewed by Matthew Wright (Reader)
Reviewed on January 15, 2008
Ahh, the hell of the shell - love that line. So true and written with beautiful language. The first two lines really hook you in. I really like this one and will return to enjoy it again. Thank you.

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on January 14, 2008
"love's many tumbling waters"
Gotta love that ;) Excellent poem, Kate!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on January 11, 2008
Powerfully symbolic and metaphorical, this poem expresses deep meaning, Kate. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on January 10, 2008
many layers in your metaphors, we can learn so much from nature...science believes it/nature is a blueprint if we'd only stop being so pomp in trying to control it and just observe its ability to exist....love the last stanza

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on January 10, 2008
A very beautiful and scenic piece so close to God-like in inspiration...

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on January 10, 2008
Bravo. Awesome. you really described love and life's reality. Liz

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on January 10, 2008
An exquisite look at love's fragile ego...outstanding write!

Carole~

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on January 10, 2008
To think you must have written this whilst suffering the depths of the flu.
Kinda redemptive feel.
As the vulnerable innocent heart goes out jogging and swimming, hoping to find love. Then it's ambushed by life's predators, caged and abused, until love slowly sets it free, giving it new life. Then off it swims in the transparent blue, its life's true destination....

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on January 10, 2008
Lady of the Sea, what a wondrous poem penned by Thee!

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on January 9, 2008
Outstanding (ovation)! I can feel my water-logged heart lying there on the gritty beach, bleaching. What incredible power your word-choices have. This is by far the best love poem I've ever come across -- ever! Shelley, roll over! In an era saturated with sappy love poems, this one out-weighs them all. --Charlie

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on January 9, 2008
I always love everything you write. You make it all seem so easy which is the ear mark of a master. No matter the age of your poems, they're timeless.
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by Ted Bossis
Reviewed on January 9, 2008
Vulnerable_liberating truths_pearls within( )softened wax_this heart afresh in open waters_(stunning beauty)veevlool(Ted)

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 9, 2008
love in all of its many facets could not be depicted better!Amazing Kate!Kudo's!

ET

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on January 9, 2008
such a sweet metaphoric write-

Reviewed on January 9, 2008
Gorgeous piece of poetry, Kate; you enthrall me, inspire me, with your words, your gift of writing! BRAVA! Extremely well penned!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on January 9, 2008
Ah sweet Kate, you know you got the attention of this old salt, who has sailed the Northern waters all the way to the North Pole and back and seen seals frolic here in Halifax Harbour more than a few times. They are a ravenous bunch and eat their weight in fish each day but they are also naive to their predators just like some of us are to the ones we chose as lovers. Well done Kate...hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on January 9, 2008
Kate I am glad this hit the light of the day,,It is full of feelings swimming free, yet always on guard. very soothing and playful.
well done! :) Christine

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on January 9, 2008
"Love to love adheres, a silky-stockinged / chainmail that coats the heart afresh," . . . Once could almost accuse you of saying love puts you in chains . . . Which, I suppose it does in its sweet and cloying way . . . I loved the caverans you took us to within the body of this exploratory piece of work . . . Nothing stood still, flesh against flesh . . . Danger lurking . . . Finely done . . .

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on January 9, 2008
Nicely done metaphoric beauty you have created. The heart must never go out of its element, for love must remain undisturbed within the concaves where it beats so freely.

Reviewed by blue soplain (Reader)
Reviewed on January 9, 2008
i love the idea of barnacled anything, much elss pain. . .. something to scrape off the soul. . .cleaving and damaging..genius image.
this whole write is just so smooth; an irony considering the barnacles :} has such compassion in it.
tip top.
ness

Reviewed on January 9, 2008
Kate this is top shelf, wonderful descriptives.

Reviewed on January 9, 2008
EXQUISITELY imaged (and felt!) in verse, Kate; well done!!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.


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