Have been rummaging through last year's poetry bag to see what never hit the light of day... Here's one from early July. K xx
THE SEAL
The heart is an unarmoured mollusc,
a fleshy sticky-bud, moist with life.
Vibrant, it sends out its electrifying sensors
to swim in darting packs, trawling deep waters
of unseen unknown, gathering quicksilver reflections,
finding freedoms in warm currents of liberating truths:
It shoals.
Looming-shadow predators darkly emerge
with cavernous, nerve-crunching jaws and
flesh-shredding teeth, causing heart’s feelers
to withdraw, to conceal itself behind
spiny-coated barricades, snailing up inside.
This then the shell, the hell
where threatening dangers – phantom or real –
enforce a solitary incarceration;
under heavily-guarded sentence,
heart’s colour drains, its life leeched
like clean-picked bone.
Healing comes when,
with diver’s light descending,
it prises away all barnacled pain
and liberates the pearl of teardrops within.
Love to love adheres, a silky-stockinged
chainmail that coats the heart afresh,
a sheath of softened wax that only
each to other melts and tentatively opens:
The Seal.
So vulnerable, the heart,
and awkward when beached and bleached;
so gracefully saturated-heavy
when swimming in its element
of love’s many tumbling waters.
I never fail to be awed by your poetic images, Kate! This one is no exception, and I am glad that you re-entered it here on the Den. The title drew me to it, and I was engulfed in the vortex of your vivid
images within.
Your bio portrait is quite an image, too, m'dear. A lovely woman you are, indeed!
A poem of true love, difficulty, shells and barricades and the need - the risk and beauty - of opening up, looking for the pearl within. These are the kind of thoughts and feelings I have when I read your poem. I love the way you bring about the vision of "healing"...
This is not the first time I have the feeling of a familiar universe and imagery in your poems. Some kind of similarity - with many inspiring and thrilling differences :-) - in the themes and images chosen... If you ever read "soft meat", "inside the shell" or even "living toy", you will probably feel this too...
somehow missed this poem ... so many finely crafted images ... conceptually stimulating... makes an vibrant and attentive poem ... i would luv to hear this poem recited ...
Reviewed by Matthew Wright (Reader)
Reviewed on January 15, 2008
Ahh, the hell of the shell - love that line. So true and written with beautiful language. The first two lines really hook you in. I really like this one and will return to enjoy it again. Thank you.
many layers in your metaphors, we can learn so much from nature...science believes it/nature is a blueprint if we'd only stop being so pomp in trying to control it and just observe its ability to exist....love the last stanza
An exquisite look at love's fragile ego...outstanding write!
Carole~
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on January 10, 2008
To think you must have written this whilst suffering the depths of the flu.
Kinda redemptive feel.
As the vulnerable innocent heart goes out jogging and swimming, hoping to find love. Then it's ambushed by life's predators, caged and abused, until love slowly sets it free, giving it new life. Then off it swims in the transparent blue, its life's true destination....
Outstanding (ovation)! I can feel my water-logged heart lying there on the gritty beach, bleaching. What incredible power your word-choices have. This is by far the best love poem I've ever come across -- ever! Shelley, roll over! In an era saturated with sappy love poems, this one out-weighs them all. --Charlie
I always love everything you write. You make it all seem so easy which is the ear mark of a master. No matter the age of your poems, they're timeless.
Love,
Susan
Ah sweet Kate, you know you got the attention of this old salt, who has sailed the Northern waters all the way to the North Pole and back and seen seals frolic here in Halifax Harbour more than a few times. They are a ravenous bunch and eat their weight in fish each day but they are also naive to their predators just like some of us are to the ones we chose as lovers. Well done Kate...hugs
Fee
Kate I am glad this hit the light of the day,,It is full of feelings swimming free, yet always on guard. very soothing and playful.
well done! :) Christine
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on January 9, 2008
"Love to love adheres, a silky-stockinged / chainmail that coats the heart afresh," . . . Once could almost accuse you of saying love puts you in chains . . . Which, I suppose it does in its sweet and cloying way . . . I loved the caverans you took us to within the body of this exploratory piece of work . . . Nothing stood still, flesh against flesh . . . Danger lurking . . . Finely done . . .
Nicely done metaphoric beauty you have created. The heart must never go out of its element, for love must remain undisturbed within the concaves where it beats so freely.
Reviewed by blue soplain (Reader)
Reviewed on January 9, 2008
i love the idea of barnacled anything, much elss pain. . .. something to scrape off the soul. . .cleaving and damaging..genius image.
this whole write is just so smooth; an irony considering the barnacles :} has such compassion in it.
tip top.
ness
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images within.
Your bio portrait is quite an image, too, m'dear. A lovely woman you are, indeed!
This is not the first time I have the feeling of a familiar universe and imagery in your poems. Some kind of similarity - with many inspiring and thrilling differences :-) - in the themes and images chosen... If you ever read "soft meat", "inside the shell" or even "living toy", you will probably feel this too...
Anyway, great work and a title that speaks to me.
Axilea
Gotta love that ;) Excellent poem, Kate!
Regis
Be safe,
Karen
Carole~
Kinda redemptive feel.
As the vulnerable innocent heart goes out jogging and swimming, hoping to find love. Then it's ambushed by life's predators, caged and abused, until love slowly sets it free, giving it new life. Then off it swims in the transparent blue, its life's true destination....
Love,
Susan
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(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D
Fee
well done! :) Christine
this whole write is just so smooth; an irony considering the barnacles :} has such compassion in it.
tip top.
ness
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.