Ahhh... a little Sunday afternoon whimsy, owing much to Pirates Of The Caribbean 3 and many apologies to U2! :)) K xx
HURRICANE GRACE
You know her as
The Dancer,
aware only of her
sinuous moves,
her diaphanous form,
never resting;
bridging the world
in the poised arc of her soul,
taking the strain,
carrying the pain;
disarming the poisoned tongue:
no malice in her chalice;
no bone is broken
by her lips.
The world heals through
rotating curves of her hips;
she slips through chains
and rusted bars,
calls them liars.
Hers the name
of the ship,
the figurehead
at the prow,
the Now;
the colours nailed
to the mast
with no avast –
for, should her
breath be stilled,
there’ll be no torchlight
left to row by.
This is the essence of the spirit of a woman who has no fear of standing her ground. She will experience the moment by embracing the storms hidden direction, weaving a color that brightens the darkest hour. In the spirit of adventure this online book is one of my favorites.
<http://www.appins.org/martin.htm>
you have some salt in your veins Kate;- you could be the lady at the prow plowing through the mighty waves with a smile and a sway of your brave hips;-)) love it!
ET
Reviewed by blue soplain (Reader)
Reviewed on January 20, 2008
a voluptuous thing youve carved. ..
all broth and breasts and bareshouldered. ...
and su.blime[y]
:-}
ness
Susan is right, Fee does love this and approves heartily of your descriptive song of the lady of the sea. I have sailed as crew on at least five full size ships and a few smaller boats and vessels and I would never refer to one as anything but a she. There are a whole set of reasons why a ship is referred to as such and I used to have them but like a man they are lost somewhere in the missing files. All that being said you did capture a lot of those reasons in this lovely write and it is a true treasure to read and enjoy. Love ya HMC Kate
Hugs
Fee
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on January 20, 2008
Kate, Torch means fire in yank lingo.
Healing words...
-disarming the poisoned tongue:
no malice in her chalice;
no bone is broken
by her lips. <---- Your words in life are like that to all your mates, spec the disarming crystal voice that goes wiv the words...
I won't quote it was on the good ship Venus, by gawd you should've seen us.............Kierra Kate, and once only a deKade of love...OH NO, it would be DecKmate Kate and JacK n his loaded pistol packing mama, shivering yer timbers, turning yer world upside down...
Arc of her soul, lol saw Joan of Ark last night, nice frippit she was too...
An enchanting poem/pome by one Klipper Klassey Kate....
Taking life by storm with power and elegance, You are an amazing writer,,not need to apologize !
Love, Christine
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on January 20, 2008
All Hail to Grace and the the author of this tribute to this special lighthouse for the needy-in-spirit for a beautiful rendition of love and compassion . . . Damn straight . . .
If all hurricanes could have this grace! Wow--you know I'm going to say it: this, a StormSpinner kind of write, and wish I'd written it!!!!!! Superb, all the way around. Well done.
This collection of poetry addresses the nature of time, reflections on the natural world, the difficulty of loss,
contemporary social issues and gratitude for life.
Each person is but a grain of sand resting beside the sea. This thought sets the tone for Jill Eisnaugle’s latest poetry collection, Beside Still Waters.
Axilea
Shiver me timbers girl...
Best, *Glen*
Walt
<http://www.appins.org/martin.htm>
Reading your poetry is like reading a short story. What a talent you are!
Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph*
Be safe,
Karen
and the images.....sadly I have yet to see the third movie....its not on cable yet...
for, should her
breath be stilled,
there’ll be no torchlight
left to row by.
ohhhhhhh
chilling :) pax A
ET
all broth and breasts and bareshouldered. ...
and su.blime[y]
:-}
ness
Hugs
Fee
Healing words...
-disarming the poisoned tongue:
no malice in her chalice;
no bone is broken
by her lips. <---- Your words in life are like that to all your mates, spec the disarming crystal voice that goes wiv the words...
I won't quote it was on the good ship Venus, by gawd you should've seen us.............Kierra Kate, and once only a deKade of love...OH NO, it would be DecKmate Kate and JacK n his loaded pistol packing mama, shivering yer timbers, turning yer world upside down...
Arc of her soul, lol saw Joan of Ark last night, nice frippit she was too...
An enchanting poem/pome by one Klipper Klassey Kate....
Love,
Susan
Love, Christine
If all hurricanes could have this grace! Wow--you know I'm going to say it: this, a StormSpinner kind of write, and wish I'd written it!!!!!! Superb, all the way around. Well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D