LOve this poem Kate! :)
Such beauty created right before my eyes! I want to walk it all!
The sea where I need to always be!
Write On! So glad you shared this!
Warmest Blessings and Love, Warrior Purple PaSSion Lady Shexooo

STay Positive!

Fantastic strength of character in this gem!...ET

There is a feeling of power from within your thoughts which provke emotion and sense of wonder...it is so when we venture upon the sands and waves of this world which belongs....

to Nature and God...

truly nice work Kate...

Art Sun...

No, No, Kate! LUCKY US that you've written, saved, and shared this happiness of spirit! A pleasurable read, friend!
Blessings, Appreciation, and Love ~~ Micke

...your wishes move waters...and I listen to the sound...from an ocean so much beauty in force...found turning in this fine poetic piece. ...I find a tranquil inner world within your words Kate.
John

Now THAT
is a sea poem!

...and what a powerful woman/goddess you must be... to command the waves and have them obey...

But a graceful woman knows about timing-- that it is everything-- knowing when to command is a sure sign of a woman who knows how to be obeyed... it's the law, afterall... the law of a woman's nature...

--Charlie

so so serene, I love it!

Very nice indeed sweet lady,enjoyed..keep smiling OK...have a wonderful and safe day...Hugs

Your powers seem to truly emanate from the sea!

lovely and peaceful write

All as/in\ one _obediently comes easily .~. evol smaerd TedSo

Kate,

Absolutely splendid write. I love the peacefulness of the picture. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.

This is absolutely beautiful...so tranquil and peaceful...with a sense of spirituality to it...at least that is how the ocean always makes me feel.

the luxury of control is transient to say the least ... missed your vivid imagery ... lots of catching up to do ...

Oh to walk the beach with a dog. Such is the beauty of life. Carefree is how I felt while I read this. Powerful in the way it eased my mind. Soltice. Liz

Small, but has great impact - well done, Kate -

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Without a doubt, this is a keeper!

Wonderful story you weave in verse, Kate; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D

As an old beachcomber from years past, I love exploring the low tides and high to see what lovely treasures and mysteries have been washed up to lay at my feet. I love the smell of brine and the soft fogs that roll in along our North Atlantic shores. This write dear Kate brought that to mind and I wished we could have shared that landscape in reality as clearly as you offered it on paper. Well done.
hugs
Pops

Hah!! Kate, my ego convined me that you had written a poem about moi . . . While you didn't you DID write an excellent, haunting piece about a meandering mind . . . Well done!!!

It may be small write Kate but it but it has a big meaning behind it. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

"I summoned winds, commanded waves"...love the directness of the performance

So much power in this quiet photo and your words. You command the orhestra.
Love and blessings,
Susan