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Love In Lincoln
by Kate Burnside → (All Poetry by Kate Burnside)
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Wishing you the blessing of peace and assurance this Eastertime, People. Thinking today of how sacrificial love transcends all socio-spiritual boundaries and is of eternal consequence. Meanwhile, back at the ranch, this is a bit of Kate's Billy-The-Kid myth/kidology inspired by a night's stay in the so-called "Bridal Suite" of the Ellis Stores longhouse where The Kid was reputed to have been kept at one time under close house arrest! :)) xx


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LOVE IN LINCOLN


She didn’t believe that disdainful lips or the snapping garters of saloon girls were real expressions of the heart; nor the copper-pan faces of women work-worn to the bone, chafed by wedlock’s shackles. She thought love would come to her on the breeze like an unknown scent; that it would announce itself humbly in the quietest of sounds.

Though when it was Billy who asked for her hand, the need for such tiny confirmations escaped, squeezed out through walls of excitement closing in. Romance and heroism were made for each other, she reasoned. But, with rivalry between local shopkeepers growing violent (intensifying over supply of goods to military deployed to protect settlers from natives), it wasn’t long before the lavender-lace of Ellis Stores’ marriage bed began to wither and fade.

She grew lonely and tired under seeming house arrest, being supplied daily with flour to “cook for the men” and always being told “stay inside out of harm’s way, woman!” A lassitude lengthened between rounds of gunfire and the deepening stench of bitterness; grew within evening shadows and imbued the longhouse with a drowse of liquor that seeped from where the Tunstalls sat, pistols at hand on the table in front, or with rifles cocked in their laps. Grumbling murmurs stalked room to room until she was haunted by cursing and sighs; she could feel red-rimmed, sleepless eyes following her every move.

At the height of the feud, one morning dawned clean and brighter than the rest. She knew she shouldn’t, but she left the back door ajar to quicken the atmosphere when the boys went out on a raid. Above the smell of rotted boots and soaking oatmeal came a crisper, fresher pungency; a waft of mountains, musk-ox and aromatic oils. Unaccountably, she thought she heard a slight rock-fall; tiny stones slipping from an eagle’s crag. She felt momentarily drawn outside, just to take a look.

Gathering the width of her skirts tight to her slight body, she moved quickly towards the shade of pines banked at the side of the house. Noiselessly, she slid round a tree to face the red-rising buttes, foothills of the brooding sierra that stood a day’s ride distant. She thought she caught sight of a glint in a cleft, a warrior’s face in the play of light on a cliff. She shielded her eyes with one hand and tentatively leaned out from the tree’s protection, her other hand pressed to its trunk. An arrow whistled between shoulder and bark, landing with a thud just yards behind: a McSween was laid out cold on the grass, a twitching jumble of limbs; the Apache dart still quivering in his chest.

There was the sudden scent of first-melting snows from far-away, unseen peaks; the unintelligible sound of a piebald rearing then retreating at a gallop.



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 Reviews of "Love In Lincoln"
Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on April 26, 2009
Wow. The sights, the scents, the sounds. This piece is packed with exciting details. Bravo:)
Sheila

Reviewed on April 20, 2009
Oh, dear Kate! You brought us into the heat of the Wild West, and through the life/legend of Billy. My only regret is that your "tale" came to an end. You must be having a grand time on your travels...your words reflect so.
Blessings and Love - Micke

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on April 14, 2009
Your writing put me right there. I think it was the imagery conjured up with the smells is awesome. You have captured the wild west. Liz

Reviewed by F William Broome
Reviewed on April 13, 2009

The perspective of one who knows and thinks - ranks high with me.
After tis one, I do believe you conquered our West

Reviewed by Axilea MU
Reviewed on April 13, 2009
Your descriptions are amazing because you seem to choose just the right details that will awaken our senses and let our imagination complete the scene. This is both realistic and dreamlike at the same time: an interesting quality. Inspired writing Kate!

Axilea

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on April 13, 2009
Awesome write, Kate, wow, just excellent work.
You've captured the southwestern mystic so well!
Loved it!

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on April 13, 2009
What a picture you create with your words...who needs screenplays when we have your poetry?

You leave us all asking for more...
Cryssa

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on April 13, 2009
Fascinating story line, Kate...you really do need to write a book, your visuals put the reader there.

Carole~

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on April 13, 2009
Kate, your imagination and the imagery in this is just incredible! I'd love to read more!

Reviewed on April 13, 2009
Kate you rock, poetry or prose all are distinctive and compelling.

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on April 13, 2009
You had me captivated from the first word, Kate...I want to read more, I want to know where she goes from here. Since I just got up, this was like continuing within a dream, your images so clear and compelling. LOVE IT!
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on April 13, 2009
Absolutely beautiful Kate. I always look forward to reading your work. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed on April 13, 2009
Excellent imagery and verse, Kate; well done! Love the piccy!

Hope you had a great Easter Sunday; we sure did! Happy Easter!

(((HUGS))) and much love from America, your friend in Texas, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by L. Figgins
Reviewed on April 12, 2009
Perhaps another installment, Kate? Has the same affect as an Italian western on the senses. 'Foothills of the Brooding Sierra' or 'The Brooding Sierra' would make fine titles for a short story. Thoroughly enjoyed!!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 12, 2009
Kate surely you will do a novel,you can't let your talent be wasted.
You have the gift of pleasing your readers with your incredible feel for researching and knowing the topic and characters. A joy to read you Kate! Kudo's!...Eileen

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on April 12, 2009
meticulously scripted, high-lighted with vivid images and some very intriguing historical commentary of times when a gallop as well as an arrow could converge upon the boundaries of love ...

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on April 12, 2009
Kate, I admire and envy your talent for descriptive writing.
For a long time I've been meaning to write about Billy Claiborne
(the other Billy at the OK Corral), but after reading this I think I'll go back to scotch. -gene.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on April 12, 2009
wow-such a vivid write-you held me spellbound throughout!

Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on April 12, 2009
Kate...You have given us a vivid view of those times when The Wild West was thriving with restless adventure. Your imagination thrives within this piece, I bet you can write one from every overnight stay...

Great work...

Art Sun...

Reviewed on April 12, 2009
Such imagery, Kate, you take us there - and I am grateful - thank you, well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on April 12, 2009
Thank you sweet Kate, for a few moments you took me out of my world of grief and sadness over my sil's death and transported me to another time, another place and another life.Your descriptions capture smells, textures, colours and offer them to us in a 3D kalaidascope of history and myth. thank you dear friend.

Hugs
Fee

Reviewed on April 12, 2009
I just visited the old west and didn't pay a dime or roll a wheel. Job well done! Thanks. Be well, Kathy

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on April 12, 2009
memories such as these make me delighted to be alive in this century, life was only about survival then...thanks for the prose

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on April 12, 2009
You took me there, Kate. I wonder if my intruding on the scene would have made a difference. Thank you for sharing your storytelling skills. Love and peace and hugs,

Regis


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