Exceptional work Kate...there is so much we can grasp from your thoughts here, from the softness of glow to the exotic of sensuality, romantic escapade of imagination as one can see through your expressions the very depth of how we are seduced by poetry...
MY inquisitive mind started to steam and sizzle like drops of water dropped in a frying pan to check to see if it is hot enough...Kate this is sensuality defined although it seemed a little hard on aging for innner beauty does not age...
big hugs
Fee
Sizzling metaphors fragrant with sulphur and pheromones, flaming components of fiery passion...too wet to burn, what a concept! Talking With Flames has all of the elements Plato subscribed to...hot poem, Kate...
Kate, this is delicious poetry of the mind that stirs the heart
and enflames body parts best left unmentioned. I warm myself by
the crackles of your greying embers. -gene.
Hi Kate, and WOW... it just kept getting better the more I read... together a sizzling mist..unable to burn.. I love the analogies here of water and air... i know where your mind is.... lol... excellent write...
In Spirit,
Bear
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on May 15, 2009
Very nice writing as always sweet lady..enjoyed...stay safe and well...Hugss
Kate, this is so sensuous, and your choice of words so seductive! "Greedy for my secrets,you scissor my silken darkness and slink through my shadows –"...my favorite lines. Just beautiful.
the vapor of heated conversation has a way of seeping into secrets yearning to be rekindled ... sometimes its mixture declines to ignite but its crackle manages to keeps one awake and ready for the arrival of its intention ...
great imagery, Kate ...
Kate,
For me the first two stanzas are tender setting and introductory and then that third ravishes my mind, an inner explosion..."scissor my silken darkness" - so sensuous - and the rest is desire, romance, seduction, all of the glories of love and lovemaking.."a sizzling mist"
Thank you, Kate, you've brightened an overcast Singapore morning.
John
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Your coal soul still warming someone's chimney, that's for sure. --Charlie
of action-reaction,
of conflicting wishes
and complimentary emotions...
Alluring alliterations!
Axilea
nice...
Art Sun...
Kate I certainly enjoyed "Talking With Flames" and the precise descriptive flavor, wonderful.
"...increasing damp,
unable to burn..." great.
All the best to you and take good care,
Gwendolyn
big hugs
Fee
Love,
Sage
and enflames body parts best left unmentioned. I warm myself by
the crackles of your greying embers. -gene.
Regis
In Spirit,
Bear
great imagery, Kate ...
Sheila
For me the first two stanzas are tender setting and introductory and then that third ravishes my mind, an inner explosion..."scissor my silken darkness" - so sensuous - and the rest is desire, romance, seduction, all of the glories of love and lovemaking.."a sizzling mist"
Thank you, Kate, you've brightened an overcast Singapore morning.
John
Truly elegant and sensual!